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Array ( [sid] => 101856 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Who are you? [time] => 2005-07-22 02:53:01 [hometext] => To the guy I thought I loved and trusted hope its good if not I really dont kare as long as I got my feelings out I'll be fine..here it is, I hope you like [bodytext] => Who are you to lie,
And then break my heart,
Wanting me to cry,
And trying to tell me your love was right?

Who are you to have your girlfriend call,
And telling me your love wasnt true after all?
But you driven my heart wrong,
You've driven my heart into pieces into the wall.

Who are you to tell me whats right,
When your the one who cheated on me?
That wasnt so bright,
And I thought after the first time,
Everything would be alright.

Yeah I'll still love you,
My love was always true,
And will stay true, too.
You knew it was,
But you didnt care for who I am to you,
Do you?

Who are you?
What are you,
So I know what I was with,
And what I loved,
Thinking it was the one.

Who are you to cheat on me,
When you said the first day we met,
Our love will always be?
But you went for your ex,
And lied to me.

Do you even know what you had,
Is something great,
But you lost it
I hope your glad,
Because now I'm gone.
But I know one day,
You'll tell me I'm worth it if you talk to my brother,
And try to get me back if you want me bad one day,
To hold me tight forever in your arms.
But I doubt it when I have to ask,

Who are you to have your girlfriend call,
And telling me your love wasnt true after all?
But you driven my heart wrong,
You've driven my heart into pieces into the wall.
And now I am finally saying,
I'm leaving for once and for all,
Till the day you'll talk to my brother. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Baby_Grl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Who are you?

Contributed by Baby_Grl on Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 02:53:01 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Who are you to lie,
And then break my heart,
Wanting me to cry,
And trying to tell me your love was right?

Who are you to have your girlfriend call,
And telling me your love wasnt true after all?
But you driven my heart wrong,
You've driven my heart into pieces into the wall.

Who are you to tell me whats right,
When your the one who cheated on me?
That wasnt so bright,
And I thought after the first time,
Everything would be alright.

Yeah I'll still love you,
My love was always true,
And will stay true, too.
You knew it was,
But you didnt care for who I am to you,
Do you?

Who are you?
What are you,
So I know what I was with,
And what I loved,
Thinking it was the one.

Who are you to cheat on me,
When you said the first day we met,
Our love will always be?
But you went for your ex,
And lied to me.

Do you even know what you had,
Is something great,
But you lost it
I hope your glad,
Because now I'm gone.
But I know one day,
You'll tell me I'm worth it if you talk to my brother,
And try to get me back if you want me bad one day,
To hold me tight forever in your arms.
But I doubt it when I have to ask,

Who are you to have your girlfriend call,
And telling me your love wasnt true after all?
But you driven my heart wrong,
You've driven my heart into pieces into the wall.
And now I am finally saying,
I'm leaving for once and for all,
Till the day you'll talk to my brother.

Copyright © Baby_Grl ... [ 2005-07-22 02:53:01]
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Re: Who are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by nanb294eva on Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 03:04:53 AM AEST
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intense
i liked it though
set him free if he doesnt come back hunt him down and kiss him.
29

Re: Who are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Giggles1989 on Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 09:48:47 AM AEST
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GREAT POEM SIS! I LOVE, BUT U KNOW EVEN IF HE TALKS TO UR BROTHER I AM NOT GONNA LET U GO BACK OUT WITH HIM....HE HURT U LIKE I HURT JEREMY THOUGHS TIMES....I WILL NOT LET THAT HAPPEN TO A FEMALE FRIEND AND WHAT MAKES THAT POEM EVEN BETTER IS THAT HIS EX CALLED U AND SHE THINKS THAT SHE IS OFF THE HOOK, BUT I KNOW WHERE SHE LIVES SO SHE WILL HAVE HELL TO PAY STILL AND I DONT CARE WHO SEES.....I REALLY DONT SHE HAD/HAS NO RIGHT TO DO THAT AT ALL....WELL SIS I LOVE YOU AND THIS IS A GREAT POEM!...LOL....LOVE U LOTS TALK TO U LATER.

STEPHIE

Re: Who are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Giggles1989 on Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 09:48:51 AM AEST
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GREAT POEM SIS! I LOVE, BUT U KNOW EVEN IF HE TALKS TO UR BROTHER I AM NOT GONNA LET U GO BACK OUT WITH HIM....HE HURT U LIKE I HURT JEREMY THOUGHS TIMES....I WILL NOT LET THAT HAPPEN TO A FEMALE FRIEND AND WHAT MAKES THAT POEM EVEN BETTER IS THAT HIS EX CALLED U AND SHE THINKS THAT SHE IS OFF THE HOOK, BUT I KNOW WHERE SHE LIVES SO SHE WILL HAVE HELL TO PAY STILL AND I DONT CARE WHO SEES.....I REALLY DONT SHE HAD/HAS NO RIGHT TO DO THAT AT ALL....WELL SIS I LOVE YOU AND THIS IS A GREAT POEM!...LOL....LOVE U LOTS TALK TO U LATER.

STEPHIE

Re: Who are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexi_Lexi on Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:51:10 PM AEST
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Wow! I realy like ur poem and it is real!

Re: Who are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 03:35:41 PM AEST
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beautiful write. i really liked reading this one.
keep up the good work.
-trini

Re: Who are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 02:37:12 AM AEST
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yea i know he hurt u and thats not i hope u will be happy g2g bye bye

love u lil sis
jeremy

Re: Who are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 11:15:24 PM AEST
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