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Array ( [sid] => 101851 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Icy Mountains [time] => 2005-07-22 00:17:06 [hometext] => This is a reflection on my trip to Colorado in April.......I'm not sure its good. [bodytext] => Carving the ice
Shreddig the slope
You feel the board catch
And you contact the ground

The pains unbearable
But you love it
You'd do it all over
Even to just fall

The board slips underneath
You roll down the hill
People pass and laugh
But you don't care

To do what you love
Not many can
You con't get better
Unless you fail [comments] => 4 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 44 [informant] => Tricky [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Nostalgic )

Icy Mountains

Contributed by Tricky on Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 12:17:06 AM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic

Carving the ice
Shreddig the slope
You feel the board catch
And you contact the ground

The pains unbearable
But you love it
You'd do it all over
Even to just fall

The board slips underneath
You roll down the hill
People pass and laugh
But you don't care

To do what you love
Not many can
You con't get better
Unless you fail

Copyright © Tricky ... [ 2005-07-22 00:17:06]
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Re: Icy Mountains (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 02:37:08 AM AEST
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I like this one, too. Optimistic feeling and carefree.
I'm positively giddy at the thought of you writing poetry.
Keep it up... ENCORE!!!

Lylas,

Chels

Re: Icy Mountains (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 08:37:32 AM AEST
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Initially I read your poem because I like all forms of nostalgia. But, wow--when I read it I was THERE! I really liked the positive way you reflected on falling and you not caring. It sounds like you had a great time.

I couldn't find any fault with this poem and the overall feel was just what I needed this morning.

I hope you have many more trips---so you can write many more like this!

Awesome.

Kie

Re: Icy Mountains (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 06:17:47 AM AEST
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Short and to the point and convincing.I was thre riding down the icy mountain along side of you face in the snow and you were laughing. Enjoyable write.

Sinned

Re: Icy Mountains (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 02:55:24 PM AEST
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The misspellings hinder this poem but it captures a snowboarder's high. I liked it.

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