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Array ( [sid] => 101796 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hidden Secrets [time] => 2005-07-21 11:44:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Searching for life
you came my way
it's been all about you
and still is today.

I'm tired of fighting
and arguing too
I don't understand
why we always do.

Words of anger
fist to flesh
feel the pain
deep in my chest.

I try to fight back
the best I could
yet, lye on the ground
as you expected I would.

A hit and a kick
fall into place
as tears roll down
my swollen face.

Fraustrations released
remorse sets in
you say you're sorry
and won't do it again.

Ice packs on my shoulder
a kiss on the head
you're feeling better
I'm feeling dead.

Morning arises
as nothing went on
just let it go
I was the one wrong.

Bruises are hidden
as friends come by
I can not help it
I still need to cry. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 71 [informant] => eternal_sorrows [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )

Hidden Secrets

Contributed by eternal_sorrows on Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 11:44:14 AM in AEST
Topic: secrets

Searching for life
you came my way
it's been all about you
and still is today.

I'm tired of fighting
and arguing too
I don't understand
why we always do.

Words of anger
fist to flesh
feel the pain
deep in my chest.

I try to fight back
the best I could
yet, lye on the ground
as you expected I would.

A hit and a kick
fall into place
as tears roll down
my swollen face.

Fraustrations released
remorse sets in
you say you're sorry
and won't do it again.

Ice packs on my shoulder
a kiss on the head
you're feeling better
I'm feeling dead.

Morning arises
as nothing went on
just let it go
I was the one wrong.

Bruises are hidden
as friends come by
I can not help it
I still need to cry.

Copyright © eternal_sorrows ... [ 2005-07-21 11:44:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hidden Secrets (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 09:40:32 PM AEST
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This is heartbreaking , yet written with a flair that I am getting accustomed to from your pen. Again, you are very good.

Well done my friend
Larry

Re: Hidden Secrets (User Rating: 1 )
by cetblue on Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 02:23:56 PM AEST
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Depressing, but deeply moving and well-written. Well done.

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