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What’s on the outside is all they see

But on the inside, I hide the lies

As much as I know it’s not wise.

People don’t notice, that I cut

They don’t know, I’ve fallen into a rut

People tease me all day at school

Maybe it’s because they think it’s cool

I hide behind a mask of indifference, pretending I don’t care

Most people only care about what they’re going to wear

My friends think I’m happy here, the believe the mask

I want someone to understand, is that too much to ask?

So please see through my exterior

Don’t make me feel too inferior

I just don’t see why I should even try

I’m so upset, I can’t even cry

Please tell dad I’m doing my homework

Otherwise I’m sure he’ll go berserk.

Well I’d best be off, the blade calls

Please call me when the sun falls.

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Nobody Knows

Contributed by sylviawalters on Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 06:36:35 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Nobody know what it’s like to be me

What’s on the outside is all they see

But on the inside, I hide the lies

As much as I know it’s not wise.

People don’t notice, that I cut

They don’t know, I’ve fallen into a rut

People tease me all day at school

Maybe it’s because they think it’s cool

I hide behind a mask of indifference, pretending I don’t care

Most people only care about what they’re going to wear

My friends think I’m happy here, the believe the mask

I want someone to understand, is that too much to ask?

So please see through my exterior

Don’t make me feel too inferior

I just don’t see why I should even try

I’m so upset, I can’t even cry

Please tell dad I’m doing my homework

Otherwise I’m sure he’ll go berserk.

Well I’d best be off, the blade calls

Please call me when the sun falls.

Copyright Â© sylviawalters ... [ 2005-07-21 06:36:35]
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Re: Nobody Knows (User Rating: 1 )
by Chilibear on Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 08:37:20 PM AEST
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Wow, that was a great poem, very sad. I loved it. Keep it up!

- Chili

Re: Nobody Knows (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:11:06 AM AEST
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The words of some people can make us or break us. A very sad emotional write. The blade is not the way. If ya need someone to talk to please pm me. I would so much love to talk. May you see brighter days.
*heartfelt hugs 4 u*
Sue

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