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Array ( [sid] => 101764 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Days to Pass On [time] => 2005-07-21 00:01:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Verse One:
How many days had passed
Before I opened my eyes
How long would that trance last
If you wouldn't have been nice enough to lie

*Instrumental Break*

Chorus:
You don't love me
You love that I'm naive
Any word you say to me
You know I would believe
You never loved me
Only that I was easily deceived

Verse Two:
How many days did pass
Before I realized
How long did that trance last
Until I said good-bye

Chorus

*Instrumental Break*

Verse Three:
You stole that part of me
And now it's gone for good
The part that was naive
I never knew the truth

Chorus Two Times

Ending:
Only Temptation to survive the death
To pick up the pieces of what's left
(repeats until song fades) [comments] => 1 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 34 [informant] => dreamer_4_eternity [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Days to Pass On

Contributed by dreamer_4_eternity on Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 12:01:30 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Verse One:
How many days had passed
Before I opened my eyes
How long would that trance last
If you wouldn't have been nice enough to lie

*Instrumental Break*

Chorus:
You don't love me
You love that I'm naive
Any word you say to me
You know I would believe
You never loved me
Only that I was easily deceived

Verse Two:
How many days did pass
Before I realized
How long did that trance last
Until I said good-bye

Chorus

*Instrumental Break*

Verse Three:
You stole that part of me
And now it's gone for good
The part that was naive
I never knew the truth

Chorus Two Times

Ending:
Only Temptation to survive the death
To pick up the pieces of what's left
(repeats until song fades)

Copyright © dreamer_4_eternity ... [ 2005-07-21 00:01:30]
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Re: Days to Pass On (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 12:52:01 AM AEST
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A good write of feelings most have felt at some time or other. I like the chorus, particularly. With the right music and vocals, this has real possiblities. Good work!

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