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Array ( [sid] => 101736 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Pain Inside [time] => 2005-07-20 19:13:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A deadly rose
A Poison kiss
As far as I know
I didn’t deserve this

A bloody razor
A wrist painted red
This wouldn’t have happened
If those words weren’t said

A bottle of pills
A cap in my hand
I could take them all
And I’d leave this land

A last day to live
A chance to say goodbye
I tell all my friends
That I just want to die

A gun to my head
A bullet inside
I pull trigger
One quick ride

A body on the floor
A bullet in my head
I bet you wish you could take it all back now
But its too late, im dead [comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 13 [informant] => xxSuicidalChickxx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The Pain Inside

Contributed by xxSuicidalChickxx on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 07:13:30 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A deadly rose
A Poison kiss
As far as I know
I didn’t deserve this

A bloody razor
A wrist painted red
This wouldn’t have happened
If those words weren’t said

A bottle of pills
A cap in my hand
I could take them all
And I’d leave this land

A last day to live
A chance to say goodbye
I tell all my friends
That I just want to die

A gun to my head
A bullet inside
I pull trigger
One quick ride

A body on the floor
A bullet in my head
I bet you wish you could take it all back now
But its too late, im dead

Copyright Â© xxSuicidalChickxx ... [ 2005-07-20 19:13:30]
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Re: The Pain Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by systematiq on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 07:18:01 PM AEST
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thats deep .. i like how u think .. but suicide isnt worth it .. cutting maybe if it makes u feel better but then u have to look at the scars and feel the pain that forced u to cut all over again ... i juss burn my self wit cigs.. n make cool designse :)

Re: The Pain Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 08:39:12 PM AEST
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Ok, are you ok.. are you just being creative.. your poetry scares me for some reason..

Please let me know its just a poem, and that you are ok.. ty ty..

Yours truly,

Raquel Leah (Poetress)

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