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Array ( [sid] => 101712 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No way out [time] => 2005-07-20 12:16:41 [hometext] => I dont know but i'm bored so i'm wrighting and i want comments plz [bodytext] => I don’t need to know you
I never wanted to care
But you’ve broken into me
And I found you’ve become a part of me

This wasn’t what I wanted
But I couldn’t give it up
I’d never thought I’d find it
But found everything in you.

You pushed until I pulled
I screamed until I cried
This frustrated hate ,
Ashes of love…

This dust is all there is of my soul
But you found your way in ,
And I gave you my heart
Now there’s no way out. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 43 [informant] => strwbrrystrbrst0225 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

No way out

Contributed by strwbrrystrbrst0225 on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 12:16:41 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I don’t need to know you
I never wanted to care
But you’ve broken into me
And I found you’ve become a part of me

This wasn’t what I wanted
But I couldn’t give it up
I’d never thought I’d find it
But found everything in you.

You pushed until I pulled
I screamed until I cried
This frustrated hate ,
Ashes of love…

This dust is all there is of my soul
But you found your way in ,
And I gave you my heart
Now there’s no way out.

Copyright Â© strwbrrystrbrst0225 ... [ 2005-07-20 12:16:41]
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Re: No way out (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 01:09:55 PM AEST
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This is a good write. Just a couple of peices of advice...most people in here shy away from poets that beg for comments in thier explantion of the poem.

Re: No way out (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 01:13:51 PM AEST
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This is an alright write, i would suggest that you dont beg for comments, people tend to overlook poems that the author begs for them.

Re: No way out (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:40:37 PM AEST
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you should write more when your in this mood because i think youve captured a lovely honest style in your poetry with lines like 'But you’ve broken into me
And I found you’ve become a part of me'

p.s feel free to comment on my work too

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