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Array ( [sid] => 10170 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => goodbye [time] => 2003-01-10 23:40:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The first time I saw you I saw your soul in your eyes
Deep pools of brown and caring emotions

Your voice was smooth and deep
Talking to you was like talking to God

You knew everything

When you held me I could feel our bodies merge into one
being
Your kiss brought meaning to life

Your hands holding me made me feel safe
Your smell was sweet and clean

When you said I love you
I felt like I had met my one soulmate

In a way I had

After two beautiful years of learning about our selves,
love, and life

YOu broke my heart
In a sense you stole my soul

We were one
NOw that you are gone I didnt know who I was anymore


But now I am ready to say goodbye
Goodbye to your eyes, your smell, our talks.
Goodbye to windows and doors.
Goodbye to hugs and kisses.
Goodbye to eternal promises that are made to be broken.
Goodbye to our love. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 24 [informant] => KraZshyt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
goodbye

Contributed by KraZshyt on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



The first time I saw you I saw your soul in your eyes
Deep pools of brown and caring emotions

Your voice was smooth and deep
Talking to you was like talking to God

You knew everything

When you held me I could feel our bodies merge into one
being
Your kiss brought meaning to life

Your hands holding me made me feel safe
Your smell was sweet and clean

When you said I love you
I felt like I had met my one soulmate

In a way I had

After two beautiful years of learning about our selves,
love, and life

YOu broke my heart
In a sense you stole my soul

We were one
NOw that you are gone I didnt know who I was anymore


But now I am ready to say goodbye
Goodbye to your eyes, your smell, our talks.
Goodbye to windows and doors.
Goodbye to hugs and kisses.
Goodbye to eternal promises that are made to be broken.
Goodbye to our love.




Copyright © KraZshyt ... [ 2003-01-10 23:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by chantel on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 11:59:01 PM AEST
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it takes a lot ot say goodbye it has taken me so far 1 year and i still havn't been able too this was very good it holds a lot of my life in it good job hope to see more thank you for sharing
chantel


Re: goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 02:05:13 PM AEST
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goodbye is the hardest thing , but i guess ur strong enough to say it which is good ...... gr8 write......GINA




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