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Dreams of Drowning
Contributed by
stellar
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Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:54:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I'm trying so hard to keep my head above water
But it's taking everything I have not to drowned
One more blow to my heart that big
Could be the final blow that takes me down
Sinking so fast, so quickly I fall
My mind flooded with images of what could never be at all
Was it too much to ask for just a moment of peace?
All I really wanted was a little tension released
So much heartache is never good for the soul
The years of tourment and anguish were bound to take their toll
The water was above my head now
My labored breath was growing weak
I'd all but lost any strength I had now
Long since gone was my ability to speak
Then I opened my eyes for my final scene
That's when I noticed it was only a dream
And it was only my tears so I wiped them away
Though I struggled I'd made it through another day
Copyright ©
stellar
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2005-07-19 21:54:14]
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Re: Dreams of Drowning
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by SylviaWalters on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 06:02:10 AM AEST
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Very good. Well written. Easy to relate to. :D
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