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Array ( [sid] => 101665 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love Blind [time] => 2005-07-19 21:42:32 [hometext] => kind of a song...kinda of interesting at the end. tell me what you think! [bodytext] => this emotion is burning inside
this loneliness is too much
its dark and i stare into nothing
i know whats going to happen
im not scared
ill show you

take this feeling and cut it deep
until all the pain bleeds for everyone to see
your numb and you scream
this is love, this is love

the rage in me burns
as i imagine you with her tonight
i dont wanna believe the truth
but reality is here
and it hurts

take this feeling and cut it deep
until all the pain bleeds for everyone to see
your numb and you scream
this is love, this is love

into my dreams i go
the memories still fresh
its the night we first met
i lay with you until i fall asleep
i wake up and im alone, im alone
your gone

you still dont see me
whats it gunna take
you still dont see me
i will do whatever it takes

i take my feelings and cut them deep
so deep that all my anger bleeds
maybe one day you will see
this love
im numb and i scream
this is love
i hate you
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 36 [informant] => hearts4pain [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Love Blind

Contributed by hearts4pain on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:42:32 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



this emotion is burning inside
this loneliness is too much
its dark and i stare into nothing
i know whats going to happen
im not scared
ill show you

take this feeling and cut it deep
until all the pain bleeds for everyone to see
your numb and you scream
this is love, this is love

the rage in me burns
as i imagine you with her tonight
i dont wanna believe the truth
but reality is here
and it hurts

take this feeling and cut it deep
until all the pain bleeds for everyone to see
your numb and you scream
this is love, this is love

into my dreams i go
the memories still fresh
its the night we first met
i lay with you until i fall asleep
i wake up and im alone, im alone
your gone

you still dont see me
whats it gunna take
you still dont see me
i will do whatever it takes

i take my feelings and cut them deep
so deep that all my anger bleeds
maybe one day you will see
this love
im numb and i scream
this is love
i hate you




Copyright © hearts4pain ... [ 2005-07-19 21:42:32]
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Re: Love Blind (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenandinlove16 on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 10:34:40 PM AEST
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WOW! that is really deep, good but deep, i like it alot! :-)


Re: Love Blind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 10:17:08 AM AEST
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woah some dark words. i can even relate in places i think. nice work.


Re: Love Blind (User Rating: 1 )
by needs_change on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:34:11 PM AEST
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i ***** love this poem. it really hits home for me. it just.....***** rocks. awsome awsome job.keep it up


Re: Love Blind (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 11:09:21 PM AEST
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wow, i absolutely loved it. So beautiful, and dark... amazing write.

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