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Array ( [sid] => 101662 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pain Anonymous [time] => 2005-07-19 21:39:11 [hometext] => favorite one ive written- please comment [bodytext] => forget these tears.
screw this pain.
somebody knock me out cuz
the more i think, the less i gain.

this guilt's the worst punishment.
i cant stand one more moment.
deaths running through my mind.
my life's so exorbitant.

unknown feelings are sinking in.
burning me to ashes like fire and sin.

it sickens the mind
and weakens the soul
this feeling's not so kind,
it takes all we know.

leaving me with angry thoughts,
this knife has caught my eye.
its blade's so convincing,
so cunning, and sly.

is tonight the last night?
am i going to die?
the voice whispers no...
dammit its right.

besides, its not my time.
death isnt the way.
with a good nights rest,
pain will start over the next day.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 6 [informant] => hearts4pain [notes] => (Please follow site rules or you will be deleted) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Pain Anonymous

Contributed by hearts4pain on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:39:11 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

forget these tears.
screw this pain.
somebody knock me out cuz
the more i think, the less i gain.

this guilt's the worst punishment.
i cant stand one more moment.
deaths running through my mind.
my life's so exorbitant.

unknown feelings are sinking in.
burning me to ashes like fire and sin.

it sickens the mind
and weakens the soul
this feeling's not so kind,
it takes all we know.

leaving me with angry thoughts,
this knife has caught my eye.
its blade's so convincing,
so cunning, and sly.

is tonight the last night?
am i going to die?
the voice whispers no...
dammit its right.

besides, its not my time.
death isnt the way.
with a good nights rest,
pain will start over the next day.

Copyright © hearts4pain ... [ 2005-07-19 21:39:11]
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Re: Pain Anonymous (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 09:00:41 PM AEST
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omg you're right, it's my favorite of the ones you've written too.

i loved this poem! really great job.

~natalya

Re: Pain Anonymous (User Rating: 1 )
by exiled on Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 11:53:17 PM AEST
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You have an amazing play on words in this poem. Very well written, and structured. I really enjoyed this one!

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