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Blazing devil
Contributed by
rosethorn100
on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:11:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Here and now it still goes on
Your everlasting outburst rage
The madness still perplexed
On the far side of your iron cage
The blazing devil is still trapped inside.
The family home ought to be,
Safe, caring, living surroundings
But instead I lived with fearfulness
With your radical soundings
To the moments you would erupt.
Even at your tender golden age
The defeating of your insanity
Controlling the animal within you,
This aggression is not humanity
Still you never strive to hold back.
I had to burden this tumultuous disturbance
Leaving me ill natured with mental scars
That cannot be modified even with surgical knife,
Am torn within myself and fragile like jars
From this blazing devil you never absented.
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rosethorn100
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2005-07-19 01:11:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Blazing devil
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:24:47 AM AEST (User
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A heartfelt write, written with such passion. I am glad it brought the two of you closer. Don't stop writing....it helps...believe me!!
Welcome to YPDC....hope to see more of your work..
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Re: Blazing devil
(User Rating: 1 ) by billy_corgan on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:27:10 AM AEST (User
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Fathers are important figures in our lifes, even if they are abusive. Good write, Im not sure your angry though the poem is more remorseful. Funny, I call my father a blazing devil too, but thats because he's british, and a pompous one at that, especially after to much to drink. |
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Re: Blazing devil
(User Rating: 1 ) by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 08:04:02 PM AEST (User
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Strong one rosey, well done!.....
Keep on expressing yerself thru yer poems.
It surely helps as many already say so often.
huggssss,
Nats. |
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