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Array ( [sid] => 101559 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Together [time] => 2005-07-18 22:03:45 [hometext] => To my beautiful family that I finally got to see on leave. I wrote this right after my daughter went to sleep she is 6 months old and it was the first time I got to see her. I love you both very much and I always will….Steve [bodytext] =>
A beautiful thought
And a beautiful wish
Heart felt emotions
That turn into this
Dreams that come true
When I’m lost in your eyes
And warm in your arms
Is the place I hide

I see are love
In our daughters eyes
Emotions I find
That will never subside
Tears that fall
In eternal bliss
To think I’ve found
A love such as this

A family at last
Together as one
Lost in are arms
We can never go wrong
Forever in love
With a warm embrace
Forever in love
Lost in this place

~Steve~ [comments] => 5 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 2 [informant] => sride686 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Together

Contributed by sride686 on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 10:03:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

A beautiful thought
And a beautiful wish
Heart felt emotions
That turn into this
Dreams that come true
When I’m lost in your eyes
And warm in your arms
Is the place I hide

I see are love
In our daughters eyes
Emotions I find
That will never subside
Tears that fall
In eternal bliss
To think I’ve found
A love such as this

A family at last
Together as one
Lost in are arms
We can never go wrong
Forever in love
With a warm embrace
Forever in love
Lost in this place

~Steve~

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Re: Together (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 11:40:15 PM AEST
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what a beautiful and loving write .once again you did good on this.
well done.

hugs

Re: Together (User Rating: 1 )
by LolaWhite on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 11:41:11 PM AEST
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I would be honored to be the first to comment on this poem. It brought tears to my eyes. I am so glad that you were able to see your baby. Having a child is the most amazing feeling in the world, and sharing the love you have for that child with your wife is one of the most amazing loves a person can ever feel. I loved the way this poem flowed. Again...words of truth. You speak from your heart and I love that about your poetry. Keep them coming Steve.
Your friend.
Miss Lola White

Re: Together (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:39:04 AM AEST
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Well seems you have a precious, treasure.......and some bliss with the whole. Do keep what you have, because many cant have . Nice write, for togetherness.

Brew~

Re: Together (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 12:43:01 PM AEST
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Much congratulations to you and your family!! and a well written poem as well!

always a pleasure to read your stuff.

take care Steve

dw

Re: Together (User Rating: 1 )
by CarolinaBlue on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:35:09 PM AEST
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Seeing your daughter of 6 months for the first time must've been a heavenly moment, I know being away from your family can be extremely hard. Your write was filled with pure emotion. Lovely!

~Blue~

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