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Array ( [sid] => 101543 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Didnt Know [time] => 2005-07-18 17:47:00 [hometext] => I Didnt know I needed my boyfriend until I lost him... [bodytext] => I didnt think I needed you anymore
I thought I was over you
I didnt know how lucky I was until I lost you
Emptiness started to fill my lost and unknowned happiness
When I lost you
I made the bigest mistake in the world
Thought I didnt love you anymore
I'mstupid
I didnt even know my own feelings
I didnt know I needed you this much
Suicide thoughts run through my head
But the thoughts and memories or you
Over come those thoughts
But the more I think of you
The more I want to die
The more those razors want to slit across my wrists
I cut your name in my wrist
thinking about you the chance I missed
How stupid could I be
I didnt even know my own feelings
I didnt know how lucky I was [comments] => 3 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 22 [informant] => sick_n_twisted [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I Didnt Know

Contributed by sick_n_twisted on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 05:47:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I didnt think I needed you anymore
I thought I was over you
I didnt know how lucky I was until I lost you
Emptiness started to fill my lost and unknowned happiness
When I lost you
I made the bigest mistake in the world
Thought I didnt love you anymore
I'mstupid
I didnt even know my own feelings
I didnt know I needed you this much
Suicide thoughts run through my head
But the thoughts and memories or you
Over come those thoughts
But the more I think of you
The more I want to die
The more those razors want to slit across my wrists
I cut your name in my wrist
thinking about you the chance I missed
How stupid could I be
I didnt even know my own feelings
I didnt know how lucky I was

Copyright © sick_n_twisted ... [ 2005-07-18 17:47:00]
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Re: I Didnt Know (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 07:07:52 PM AEST
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Wisdom does not discriminate, the young can inherit the leagacy as well as the old,
very revealing poetry, a scence of urgency
then the heart can be a most merciless
adversary . . .

Ben

Re: I Didnt Know (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 12:25:26 PM AEST
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this is a good poem, but you may want to take a little more time .. there are some mistakes .. such as:

"Emptiness started to fill my lost and "unknowned" happiness

it should be unknown .. and there are some spelling errors that I guess the mods didn't pick up. But the poem would have more power and strength if the mistakes were corrected. It's a nice piece of writing.
mary~

Re: I Didnt Know (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 11:49:38 AM AEST
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Good Write And Forget About Him, Many More Guys Will Come Into Your Life And Youll Meet The One So Just Wait Patiently And You Will Get An Amazing Guy.

*Hugs And Kisses*

Kimmy

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