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Array ( [sid] => 101532 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => AS SEEN ON TV [time] => 2005-07-18 15:52:55 [hometext] => its a little dity i thought up [bodytext] => submitted for your approval are my words of concern
your world is being eaten by the great corporate worm

its plagueing your heart and corrupting your soul
it will be not long till it finally takes it toll

our oceans are dying and pestillance in our food
the world is chaotic and we all feel the mood

wandering around in this mass of confusion
we shop till we drop and buy in to this illusion

promos and movies there vision so loud
from words of the wise as the blinded walk all so proud

this is our life as seen on tv
we follow the dumb so what are we

i wont be alone in this fight of the unreal
i cant be the only one who can feel

this pain in my heart i feel everyday
watching humanity sell there souls away

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 19 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

AS SEEN ON TV

Contributed by lostrelic on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 03:52:55 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

submitted for your approval are my words of concern
your world is being eaten by the great corporate worm

its plagueing your heart and corrupting your soul
it will be not long till it finally takes it toll

our oceans are dying and pestillance in our food
the world is chaotic and we all feel the mood

wandering around in this mass of confusion
we shop till we drop and buy in to this illusion

promos and movies there vision so loud
from words of the wise as the blinded walk all so proud

this is our life as seen on tv
we follow the dumb so what are we

i wont be alone in this fight of the unreal
i cant be the only one who can feel

this pain in my heart i feel everyday
watching humanity sell there souls away

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2005-07-18 15:52:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: AS SEEN ON TV (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:12:14 AM AEST
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Very good work and oh so true.
huggs,
emy

Re: AS SEEN ON TV (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 09:21:58 PM AEST
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Yes, TV can suck.......................................I totally agree, with the words that have been posted.!

Brew~

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