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Array ( [sid] => 101523 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I dislike her hugs [time] => 2005-07-18 14:24:37 [hometext] => a person who comes to me closely... [bodytext] => she's very dark eyes
and sleeps like a baby
turning her hair to a morning's blue fading

i like her true
but i dislike affection
that weighs me down like a world

love's such a burden
a minefield of words
and yet she comes to me forward

what will it take
to remove her care
and her wonder at why that i paint

she'd like to see
what's brewing in me
but that's for me to relate

i want her to whisper
she's quite a good listener
but paint won't create on its own

so smother me sometime tomorrow...

dw [comments] => 3 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 63 [informant] => In_a_while [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )

I dislike her hugs

Contributed by In_a_while on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 02:24:37 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

she's very dark eyes
and sleeps like a baby
turning her hair to a morning's blue fading

i like her true
but i dislike affection
that weighs me down like a world

love's such a burden
a minefield of words
and yet she comes to me forward

what will it take
to remove her care
and her wonder at why that i paint

she'd like to see
what's brewing in me
but that's for me to relate

i want her to whisper
she's quite a good listener
but paint won't create on its own

so smother me sometime tomorrow...

dw

Copyright © In_a_while ... [ 2005-07-18 14:24:37]
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Re: I dislike her hugs (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 11:33:32 PM AEST
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she's an emotional drain .. that it??? takes out but doesn't put in ... I love the last line ...

Re: I dislike her hugs (User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:26:51 PM AEST
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i feel that way as well
good write
--> Rae

Re: I dislike her hugs (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 07:17:25 PM AEST
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I love this write
But sounds like you need some space
God Bless!

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