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Array ( [sid] => 101518 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => walking [time] => 2005-07-18 13:47:11 [hometext] => R.M.W [bodytext] => life on the road full of endless adventures
walking the highway thumb in the air
walking with all that i own no stress not one care

endless nights and heat filled days the problems i must face
rain and wind and the thought of death always puts me in my place
strangers and junkies looking at my pack
waiting for the eventuall time when they will attack

lonelyness and heartach pain i know to well
when you have been running as long as i have its so easy to tell
ditches and benches alleyways and parks another home for the night
wolves and thieves running the dark feeding of the fright

churches and hostiles my full coarse meals hotdog water and bread
never able to find the lord most of the spirits are dead
preachers and goverment telling me im wrong i should trust in societies laws
never beliving anythings wrong never noticing there flaws

back on the road another city to see
on the street where i am me

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 73 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
walking

Contributed by lostrelic on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 01:47:11 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract



life on the road full of endless adventures
walking the highway thumb in the air
walking with all that i own no stress not one care

endless nights and heat filled days the problems i must face
rain and wind and the thought of death always puts me in my place
strangers and junkies looking at my pack
waiting for the eventuall time when they will attack

lonelyness and heartach pain i know to well
when you have been running as long as i have its so easy to tell
ditches and benches alleyways and parks another home for the night
wolves and thieves running the dark feeding of the fright

churches and hostiles my full coarse meals hotdog water and bread
never able to find the lord most of the spirits are dead
preachers and goverment telling me im wrong i should trust in societies laws
never beliving anythings wrong never noticing there flaws

back on the road another city to see
on the street where i am me





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Re: walking (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 05:34:50 AM AEST
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Awesome writing.
One can tell u have a big heart.
Keep up the good work.
huggs,
emy


Re: walking (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:17:08 PM AEST
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Lostrelic

Amazing--your thoughts and use of words.
Keep being you.
I really likd this write.

Sinned


Re: walking (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 12:51:50 PM AEST
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i love it...in a way...it's almost like you let the reader know who you are...it's great

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