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though most times i feel bad
why is it that no one can tell
when i am feeling sad
sit on my bed with knife in hand
and try to hold it in
sometimes it works but when it dont
my arm ends up in ribbons
these scars i bare are great and deep
from the woes of my soul
because of rejection thats come my way
i am no longer whole
over sometime they start to heal
but soon they leave their marks
this is the time that i feel good
though soon again it starts....

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only sometimes

Contributed by xXxmegsxXx on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 12:29:27 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

sometimes i feel good bout me
though most times i feel bad
why is it that no one can tell
when i am feeling sad
sit on my bed with knife in hand
and try to hold it in
sometimes it works but when it dont
my arm ends up in ribbons
these scars i bare are great and deep
from the woes of my soul
because of rejection thats come my way
i am no longer whole
over sometime they start to heal
but soon they leave their marks
this is the time that i feel good
though soon again it starts....

Copyright © xXxmegsxXx ... [ 2005-07-18 12:29:27]
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Re: only sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 01:13:03 PM AEST
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how honest and heartbreaking.... i hope that all's not that bad and that writing keeps you well.

good write and keep your head high

dw

Re: only sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by PHISHBATES on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:05:43 PM AEST
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very dark and painfull. pain can be the only honest feeling, when we don't trust ourselves and/or others. thanks for writting

Re: only sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by PHISHBATES on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:06:31 PM AEST
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very dark and painfull. pain can be the only honest feeling, when we don't trust ourselves and/or others. thanks for writting

Re: only sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by jemer on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:15:46 AM AEST
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wow amazing write. ur a legend mate

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