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Array ( [sid] => 101469 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => First Kiss [time] => 2005-07-17 22:16:44 [hometext] => This was a weird moment for me.. It was my frist kiss where some one asked... so I remember it like it was yesterday.. [bodytext] => He was messing with a piece of grass
His voice was really shaky
Then he looked at me and asked
' May I please kiss you?'

I let out a little laugh
For no guy has ever asked
So then we started talking
To rid the silent arkwardness

He suddenly dropped the piece of grass
His voice was no longer shaky
Again he looked at me and said
' Screw this, I'm goin' for it'

I let out a little gasp
For I was caught way off guard
So then our lips started to part
That was the best first kiss [comments] => 3 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 2 [informant] => countrychck [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

First Kiss

Contributed by countrychck on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 10:16:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

He was messing with a piece of grass
His voice was really shaky
Then he looked at me and asked
' May I please kiss you?'

I let out a little laugh
For no guy has ever asked
So then we started talking
To rid the silent arkwardness

He suddenly dropped the piece of grass
His voice was no longer shaky
Again he looked at me and said
' Screw this, I'm goin' for it'

I let out a little gasp
For I was caught way off guard
So then our lips started to part
That was the best first kiss

Copyright © countrychck ... [ 2005-07-17 22:16:44]
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Re: First Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 10:37:37 PM AEST
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lol. this was a neat write. and you showed the experience quite well. i think it was really nice of him to ask first, but i'm not surprised that it was awkward first. lol. it's nice that you hold onto this experience and i hope that this guy is still an important part of your life. good work, keep it up!

~sprints

Re: First Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 12:39:41 AM AEST
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a cute poem expressd well nice feel to it and

very true to life . . .

Ben

Re: First Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by visualizing_life on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 05:44:16 PM AEST
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i liked it....its an important experience and people should remember their first kiss....im ashamed to say i only remember the guy....lol.... vl

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