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Array ( [sid] => 101447 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Chocolate Covered Strawberries [time] => 2005-07-17 15:24:52 [hometext] => just wishing I had both................mmmmmmm [bodytext] => Choc covered stawberries,
They are not covered if you havent one to help you dip
They do not have the sweetness
Upon ones lips, with out another to help eat
No one there to help remove the sweet taste
To take a gentle finger and remove the juice from the face
To hold in one hand
And feed with another
To make the enjoyment be eroctic and sensual
By biting into a choc covered stawberry
Knowing it is has to be shared by two, not just one [comments] => 5 [counter] => 398 [topic] => 73 [informant] => brew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Chocolate Covered Strawberries

Contributed by brew on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 03:24:52 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Choc covered stawberries,
They are not covered if you havent one to help you dip
They do not have the sweetness
Upon ones lips, with out another to help eat
No one there to help remove the sweet taste
To take a gentle finger and remove the juice from the face
To hold in one hand
And feed with another
To make the enjoyment be eroctic and sensual
By biting into a choc covered stawberry
Knowing it is has to be shared by two, not just one

Copyright © brew ... [ 2005-07-17 15:24:52]
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Re: Chocolate Covered Strawberries (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 04:11:00 PM AEST
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oooooo you said a sweet mouthful with this write creative!
Michelle

Re: Chocolate Covered Strawberries (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 04:39:47 PM AEST
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Yes, definitely more enjoyable with two people...You can keep the chocolate though...I'll have my strawberries without thanks ; )

Scorp.

Re: Chocolate Covered Strawberries (User Rating: 1 )
by LolaWhite on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 11:01:15 PM AEST
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What I wouldn't do for a chocolate covered strawberry. I would be selfish and eat them alone...more for me that way. ; )
I liked it! Good work.
Lola

Re: Chocolate Covered Strawberries (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 01:00:54 PM AEST
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To have both Brew is not impossible after seventy five years I know. Perhaps you try too hard when dipping. Nice poem 5/5 from bernard.

Re: Chocolate Covered Strawberries (User Rating: 1 )
by Writting_Fever on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 05:02:33 PM AEST
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Mouth-watering! Very sensual I loved it. Besides.....strawberries are my favorite food!

Sarah

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