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the lies i consume
many of them were never there
until i met you

you changed me into something
that i don't want to be
all i want it to go back
but there is no way now

i've gone too far out
to turn back now
all i can do is look back
and observe what i have lost

i lost my sanity along with my life
you have taken control of me
i am like your puppet
and you have fun with my strings

i am constantly hurt and confused
while you start your game with others
soon they will be like me...
just someone for you to play with

i really don't think that you do
have any real feelings for anyone
you just like people to turn out like me
and be your toys

you like the attention
and by not letting lose
of the strings of mine that you hold
you keep that

you know that i can't get away
and you won't set me free
this hold that you've established
may be the death of me
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Aaralyn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Untitled

Contributed by Aaralyn on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 02:50:53 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

the lies I live
the lies i consume
many of them were never there
until i met you

you changed me into something
that i don't want to be
all i want it to go back
but there is no way now

i've gone too far out
to turn back now
all i can do is look back
and observe what i have lost

i lost my sanity along with my life
you have taken control of me
i am like your puppet
and you have fun with my strings

i am constantly hurt and confused
while you start your game with others
soon they will be like me...
just someone for you to play with

i really don't think that you do
have any real feelings for anyone
you just like people to turn out like me
and be your toys

you like the attention
and by not letting lose
of the strings of mine that you hold
you keep that

you know that i can't get away
and you won't set me free
this hold that you've established
may be the death of me

Copyright © Aaralyn ... [ 2005-07-17 14:50:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 07:10:59 PM AEST
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nicely written and simple.

I think a good name for the poem would be
"The puppet Mistress".

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by LolaWhite on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 11:10:51 PM AEST
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A great piece of work! I loved the whole thing.
An honest piece.
Lola

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