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I undress you

Eager to taste of your flesh

Aroused by your darkened heart

My lips meet your body

Slowly, my tongue glides over you

Swirling around, in our own private "tongue and cheek"

dance that seems to last forever

You tease me and tempt me

Caressing my lips with your touch of sweetness

In and out...........out, then in again

Melting away as your juices leave a sticky sweet

explosion of flavor in my mouth

And a deep longing...

to once again...

Taste of your Tootsie Roll heart

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How Many Licks Does It Take?

Contributed by CarolinaBlue on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 03:32:48 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

~xXx~

I undress you

Eager to taste of your flesh

Aroused by your darkened heart

My lips meet your body

Slowly, my tongue glides over you

Swirling around, in our own private "tongue and cheek"

dance that seems to last forever

You tease me and tempt me

Caressing my lips with your touch of sweetness

In and out...........out, then in again

Melting away as your juices leave a sticky sweet

explosion of flavor in my mouth

And a deep longing...

to once again...

Taste of your Tootsie Roll heart

Copyright © CarolinaBlue ... [ 2005-07-17 03:32:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: How Many Licks Does It Take? (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 04:58:04 AM AEST
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Wow! I never thought of Tootsie Pops that way before! Great poem! Loved it! Peace.
Thumper ; o)

Re: How Many Licks Does It Take? (User Rating: 1 )
by MomentInTime on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 06:15:55 AM AEST
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If only Toosie rolls could speak for themselves..............

Delightful

Jordan :o))

Re: How Many Licks Does It Take? (User Rating: 1 )
by thepizzaguy on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 10:06:56 AM AEST
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You make Tootsie Rolls sexy. I'll never look at one the same way again, haha, great write!

Re: How Many Licks Does It Take? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:08:46 PM AEST
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Very nice write blue lovely mehaphorical writting . . .

Ben

Re: How Many Licks Does It Take? (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:27:38 PM AEST
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what a ......well use the imagination for all. Wonderful write, had me going for a bit. Where do you come up with these ideas? lol

Brew~

Re: How Many Licks Does It Take? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:34:56 PM AEST
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WooHoo!! You tell 'em grrl.....
Loved this
Jenni

Re: How Many Licks Does It Take? (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 02:46:09 PM AEST
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Wow....who's the inspiration for all these sexy writes?? Lucky guy! lol
Another nice write : )

Scorp.

Re: How Many Licks Does It Take? (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 08:31:22 PM AEST
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Well Blue..the title was screaming at me..lol
and after I clicked..my monitor melted..
and I, shortly thereafter-
PHEW!

Nice innocent last line-
"Tootsie Roll Heart"

passionate..well written

B

(time for a cold shower)

Re: How Many Licks Does It Take? (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 09:49:57 PM AEST
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sexy poem. i like the part "your juices leave a sticky sweet explosion of flavor". sounds like it was fun. great poem!

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