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Array ( [sid] => 101416 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life Doesn't Matter [time] => 2005-07-17 01:07:35 [hometext] => BLAH BLAH BLAH...yet another depressing poem by me...YESH I DO WANNA DIE (and i put 'yesh' there on purppose...that's my word i created it) [bodytext] => Life Doesn’t Matter

There was a boy that I once knew
His story I must tell to you

He had a good life
But he was blue
Because he was waiting for his wish of true love
To come true

He wandered near and wandered far
His sadness slowly growing ajar

But at last
he thought he found the one
He gave away his tender love
Only to be hurt and shunned

But the pain only made his lust grow stronger
He searched for love for even longer

And while his search for love went on
I sat with him and kept him strong
For I know something he did not
I loved him even though they did not

but he still did not notice me
Even though I tried so hard to make him see

He told me he liked her
That she was the one
When he found out she wasn’t
He tried to grab the gun

How could he be so blind to see
How much he was adored by me

I said them softy
But bold enough to hear
I told him I loved him
And that he was all that I held dear

He backed away from the loaded gun
And this time I was hurt and shunned

You see this story didn’t end well for me
No happy ending filled with glee
He didn’t love me and never saw
How much he mad me smile in awe

One shot was fired
And now he’s gone

But I make it seem like he died don’t I ?
Well I don’t want to give the wrong impression
The gun was held by my right hand
And against my head I let it rest

I saw the smile in his eyes
So I pulled the trigger and said goodbye

Now I am gone
And to this day
I will regret
Wanting the love I’d never get

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Life Doesn't Matter

Contributed by PoisonousPyscho on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 01:07:35 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Life Doesn’t Matter

There was a boy that I once knew
His story I must tell to you

He had a good life
But he was blue
Because he was waiting for his wish of true love
To come true

He wandered near and wandered far
His sadness slowly growing ajar

But at last
he thought he found the one
He gave away his tender love
Only to be hurt and shunned

But the pain only made his lust grow stronger
He searched for love for even longer

And while his search for love went on
I sat with him and kept him strong
For I know something he did not
I loved him even though they did not

but he still did not notice me
Even though I tried so hard to make him see

He told me he liked her
That she was the one
When he found out she wasn’t
He tried to grab the gun

How could he be so blind to see
How much he was adored by me

I said them softy
But bold enough to hear
I told him I loved him
And that he was all that I held dear

He backed away from the loaded gun
And this time I was hurt and shunned

You see this story didn’t end well for me
No happy ending filled with glee
He didn’t love me and never saw
How much he mad me smile in awe

One shot was fired
And now he’s gone

But I make it seem like he died don’t I ?
Well I don’t want to give the wrong impression
The gun was held by my right hand
And against my head I let it rest

I saw the smile in his eyes
So I pulled the trigger and said goodbye

Now I am gone
And to this day
I will regret
Wanting the love I’d never get





Copyright © PoisonousPyscho ... [ 2005-07-17 01:07:35]
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Re: Life Doesn't Matter (User Rating: 1 )
by glassicallyunsuperficial on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 10:29:15 AM AEST
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I am now a fan after reading this...It's really good.
Thanks for this good read...
cheers
-glass


Re: Life Doesn't Matter (User Rating: 1 )
by crazygirl on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 01:56:04 PM AEST
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Very bold in your choice of words, but truely heartbreaking enough to read over and over. I really really like this...
-bailey rose-


Re: Life Doesn't Matter (User Rating: 1 )
by brknhrtdvamp16 on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 02:54:37 PM AEST
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Honestly, this poem was quite interesting. However, I think that it is too demanding for attention. Still a very good poem.




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