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Array ( [sid] => 101381 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Self Fulfilling Prophecy [time] => 2005-07-16 17:12:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The mind never narrows
Expands within each new scenario
Depends on the intensity
Or the relentlessness of the enemy

The pathway from ignorance
To brilliance
From the minute
To the total complete existence
The slope and its circumference
Commiserates
Vilifies and mediates
The ill afforded
Socialization mitigates
Even the less appropriate

Reprisals from the master
Legs churn on air
Moving nowhere faster
Plaster
The cemented brick wall
Echoes an embracing call
To which I can not answer
Only stand and applaud

This home is your refuge
Devoting the body
Vaginal
Compact and internal
Exposed vulnerability
Requires shelter unwavering
Nocturnal emissions concern
Bed spread sheet torn
The smile withers soon
A mood of euphoric
Cyclothymic
Manic depression
Ensues

Supplement this income
Add to the religion your own dose of an icon
Of a rebellion, a flimsy revolution
Circumventing the inevitable outcome
The ending

A false alliance
Based on sheer defiance
Unleash the lions
The cubs magnetically drawn
To form a patriarchal alliance
High frustration tolerance
Allows the salty sweat to permeate
And revive my thirsty conscious
Where it once stood dead

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Self Fulfilling Prophecy

Contributed by jyssvw22 on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 05:12:08 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The mind never narrows
Expands within each new scenario
Depends on the intensity
Or the relentlessness of the enemy

The pathway from ignorance
To brilliance
From the minute
To the total complete existence
The slope and its circumference
Commiserates
Vilifies and mediates
The ill afforded
Socialization mitigates
Even the less appropriate

Reprisals from the master
Legs churn on air
Moving nowhere faster
Plaster
The cemented brick wall
Echoes an embracing call
To which I can not answer
Only stand and applaud

This home is your refuge
Devoting the body
Vaginal
Compact and internal
Exposed vulnerability
Requires shelter unwavering
Nocturnal emissions concern
Bed spread sheet torn
The smile withers soon
A mood of euphoric
Cyclothymic
Manic depression
Ensues

Supplement this income
Add to the religion your own dose of an icon
Of a rebellion, a flimsy revolution
Circumventing the inevitable outcome
The ending

A false alliance
Based on sheer defiance
Unleash the lions
The cubs magnetically drawn
To form a patriarchal alliance
High frustration tolerance
Allows the salty sweat to permeate
And revive my thirsty conscious
Where it once stood dead

_______________
___________

Copyright © jyssvw22 ... [ 2005-07-16 17:12:08]
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Re: Self Fulfilling Prophecy (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 05:49:03 PM AEST
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Hmmm...maybe I spoke too soon!! lol j/k

I have to say I agree with rather a lot of what you're saying here...I think I even see what's behind all the smoke and mirrors...I like this one...Yes, I like it a lot actually! Very impressive jyss...

Scorp.

Re: Self Fulfilling Prophecy (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 10:28:02 PM AEST
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5th and final stanzas are...
just amazing jyss..
just friggin amazing-

I must say, with all sincerity,
that you are one of the most talented poets I've ever had the pleasure of reading..

flawless thoughts and ideas conveyed, all around from you...all the time.

Where do.. I ..sign up??

B

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