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Seepng from my wrist
The thorns taking place of the razor once held
One silken petal absorbing my feelings,
One dying rose being torn to peices
Once strong like the stem of the flower,
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Dying rose

Contributed by crazygirl on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 01:15:05 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

A rose, scarlet like the blood
Seepng from my wrist
The thorns taking place of the razor once held
One silken petal absorbing my feelings,
One dying rose being torn to peices
Once strong like the stem of the flower,
I now wilt like the dying rose....

Copyright © crazygirl ... [ 2005-07-16 13:15:05]
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Re: Dying rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexi_Lexi on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 03:59:11 PM AEST
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wow! Your poem is so amzing and really readl exactly how it happens well done and i am glad u let it out by poems!

Re: Dying rose (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxmegsxXx on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 05:05:53 PM AEST
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that was amazing! you have a real talent. keep it up

megs.

Re: Dying rose (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 06:01:53 PM AEST
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Pretty good expression in so few words...I like the analogy. One little spelling error..."Peice" should be "Piece." Nice job. Keep it up!
Scorp.

Re: Dying rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 09:48:35 PM AEST
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I like it a lot. I could see it in my head.
great job
-jen

Re: Dying rose (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 10:57:15 PM AEST
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good write, short but deep. very deep. it was well written and created a visual to the readers. very well done, and i wish that you would not have to put up with such pain! i wish you the best of luck!

~sprints

p.s. good write, keep up the good work!

Re: Dying rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 03:50:31 PM AEST
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It's a nice poem, but too dark, a little too dark for me heh. I hope you just wrote and didn't act on your feelings.

Take care.

Scott

Re: Dying rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 12:21:02 PM AEST
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Dark, but I like dark sometimes. Very nice write. :)

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