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Rain
Contributed by
feathercut
on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 06:21:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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blessed rain
dance atop the brick
while your beat among the streets
children call for you
in their quiet rooms
so sound them off to sleep
for a passing time
you call the life
to fall on with the night
lovers conceive
what soldiers leave
return to the sea
under the lights
and i will sleep with thee
untill i wake
and grey morning come about
and so morning came
but still a drip
though not a sound outside
for there came a passing
i had missed
among her starlit eyes
Copyright ©
feathercut
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2005-07-16 06:21:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Rain
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 06:35:41 AM AEST (User
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WWWWWWWWWWoooooooooooo, yeah now,
This write will have all the stars jus blikin-n-shinnin. I've read it four times jus 'cause it's ssssoooo beautifull.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: Rain
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sexi_Lexi on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 07:02:20 AM AEST (User
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awwwwwww i think that is a really cute meaningful and sweet poem!
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Re: Rain
(User Rating: 1 ) by wilma on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 09:12:45 AM AEST (User
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your ajectives are brilliant and it sounds like something that could definitely be published. well done |
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