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moods
Contributed by
little_genna
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Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 04:42:02 AM in AEST
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oops
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Your mood swings like the wind,
Can be so moody, yet so kind.
You cannot see you’re are like me,
You wouldn’t believe it could be.
Take it out on me,
Then be so nice to me.
You make me want to leave,
Yet I stay, it’s hard to believe.
My heart does crazy things,
Even when your words make it sting.
I don’t know how to feel,
When your angry words cut like steel.
Why do I want to cry,
Is my happiness a lie?
You make me feel such joy,
Am I just your toy?
Never physically hurt,
But certainly felt like dirt.
I know you love me,
Because you certainly show me.
Been together five months,
We’ve had more than our fair share of bumps.
Is this meant to be?
Could you walk away from me?
SJ
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Re: moods
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 05:21:38 AM AEST (User
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Very sad but great writing.
U should let him read this.
From experience it's not worth your time as the longer it goes on the more self estem u will
wither. Trust me that's not an easy thing to get back.
huggs,
emy
It's a masterpeice as so many suffer from the same abuse daily and don't know how to change things. More than likely it will get worse. |
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Re: moods
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 10:37:19 AM AEST (User
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Lovely write about a touchy subject in this
day and age, a feeling of vulnerability and
yet expressed very wisely, nicely crafted . . .
Ben |
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Re: moods
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mangs on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 05:42:44 AM AEST (User
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nice write princess....but learn to put your worries behind you....live in the moment...the future is still some way away...
Love,
Umang |
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