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A girl unknown

Contributed by roxygirl on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 02:43:17 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Shes here on this earth not know where to go
She stands in the darkness and trys to hide away from life
Shes tuck in this trap that she can not brake
She cries these burning tears that no one knows
She doesnt understand the way life goes or the way the world works
She screams for help but no one hears
She has no family here there all gone
She sees no light
She sees no fear even if death is near
She finds her self laying on the ground
Shes just so lost shes lossing her self
Shes falling into drugs and she can not stop
She thinks her life is alreadly over and whats the use of holding on
She doesnt believe theres a God
She thinks if theres a God then there wouldnt be no pain
But she doesnt know that it isnt God who is causing pain
She is trying to play the game but she has alreadly lost
She trys so hard to fit in but she just dont
Shes untuckable no one can stop her
She gets on her knees and bags for mursy with the gun to her head
She says If theres a God he will stop me from doing whats wrong
For he will pull the gun away and show me what life holds for me
She pull the triger once then twice not a bullit came out
She pulled again and still nothing happened
She open the gun and seen the bullit should have shot on the first one
God works in wierd ways




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Re: A girl unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 04:43:54 AM AEST
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I bet cha she beleives now.
Very good writing.
A masterpeice and testimony of God's luv and caring.
huggs,
emy


Re: A girl unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by chanceof_promise on Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 03:31:15 PM AEST
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wow..
this is an excellent poem..
i love it..
and it allows me to look for more in life..knowing that there is something out there for me and just for me...
i love it..




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