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second poem ever
Contributed by
aplsdka
on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 12:46:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I saw the moon
In the month of june
Floating across the sky clear blue
Wishing I could be there too
Floating along in the evening light
Staying up there all night
Copyright ©
aplsdka
... [
2005-07-16 00:46:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: second poem ever
(User Rating: 1 ) by paul_x_walker on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 01:30:07 AM AEST (User
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pretty good |
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Re: second poem ever
(User Rating: 1 ) by paul_x_walker on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 01:30:07 AM AEST (User
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pretty good |
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Re: second poem ever
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 05:40:09 AM AEST (User
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Very good write. Keep it up.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: second poem ever
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 12:51:30 PM AEST (User
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not bad at all.
good job |
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