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life is like a lampshade
Contributed by
je2ica3
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Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 11:34:17 PM in AEST
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1.life is like a lamp shade all diffrent types.
5.people are all diffrent.
2.some are pink some are purple.
6.some are white some are black.
3.diffrent sizes diffrent personalites.
7.were all diffrent we all act diffrent.
8. lamshades are like people of course thats what ive been describing the whole time people that is.
4.you see lamp shades either block the light oh so very well or they let every one see the light .
9.either people see the real you or they dont.
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Re: life is like a lampshade
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 11:19:34 AM AEST
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I liked the way you mixed it up with the numbers. That was cool, a good idea.
I thought line 8 to be a little redundant or overstated, but... sometimes we just need that, don't we?
Love and peace,
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Re: life is like a lampshade
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by miss_jules on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 01:49:06 PM AEST
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| I'm glad you put all of line 8 in there... I didn't get it until that line. Great write. |
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