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Array ( [sid] => 101287 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rot In Hell [time] => 2005-07-15 17:21:42 [hometext] => No comments please...This is something I needed to do. [bodytext] => Darkened days and glistening nights
wake up---shaking---full of fright

Pain kept at bay until deceitful eyes close
coffee to stay awake, but eventually I doze

Greeted by a nightmare so fresh in detail
where my progress and courage start to derail

I hate you! You, you, and you!
for the anguish that you've put me through

Go to hell already! Your bed of fire awaits
aim so steady, their mission castrates

Haven't you done enough? Why must it haunt my dreams?
wake up shaking, clammy, silenced is my screams

I hate how weak you make me; defenseless once again
the only way I have guts to face you, is by paper and pen. [comments] => 10 [counter] => 325 [topic] => 39 [informant] => hauntedscorp [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 61 [ratings] => 13 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Rot In Hell

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 05:21:42 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Darkened days and glistening nights
wake up---shaking---full of fright

Pain kept at bay until deceitful eyes close
coffee to stay awake, but eventually I doze

Greeted by a nightmare so fresh in detail
where my progress and courage start to derail

I hate you! You, you, and you!
for the anguish that you've put me through

Go to hell already! Your bed of fire awaits
aim so steady, their mission castrates

Haven't you done enough? Why must it haunt my dreams?
wake up shaking, clammy, silenced is my screams

I hate how weak you make me; defenseless once again
the only way I have guts to face you, is by paper and pen.

Copyright © hauntedscorp ... [ 2005-07-15 17:21:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Rot In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 05:48:06 PM AEST
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Re: Rot In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 07:40:27 PM AEST
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hugs

Re: Rot In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 08:36:02 PM AEST
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(((((((((((((((Scorp))))))))))))))))))))))

Re: Rot In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 10:23:13 PM AEST
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Great write SISTER! LOL peace to you Laura

Re: Rot In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:47:06 AM AEST
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BIG HUG

Re: Rot In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:50:12 AM AEST
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I love me and my pen too
you said no ccomments

Re: Rot In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 01:44:18 AM AEST
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lol scorp

wow intense girl.

Re: Rot In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 03:38:41 PM AEST
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Ok, no comment.....but what about remarks :)

Power of faith and power of pen, Amen!

Peace be with you, Scorp

Will

Re: Rot In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:10:58 PM AEST
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(thumbs up) No comment. (But can I borrow it???) :-D

Re: Rot In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 06:13:11 PM AEST
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Ok .. no comment, but can I leave a quote? (just try and stop me! :p)

"Anyone can become angry. That is easy. But to be angry with
the right person, to the right degree, at the right time, for the right
purpose and in the right way... that is not easy."
~ Aristotle.

'nuff said.

~Breezy

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