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Array ( [sid] => 101264 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In Another World [time] => 2005-07-15 10:53:28 [hometext] => Joyous Hearts instead of troubled minds.....[Inspirational & religious poetry] [bodytext] => An aching heart that's deep inside.
Facing the worst of pain that can't hide.
Questions that need answers every day.
Standing, sitting and waiting to pray.
Following the narrow winding path,
when the wide straight one is an easy laugh.
Trouble seems to go past this way.
Yet others seem to be managing okay?
The right way, is hard work-no play.
To be sinful feels it's "the easier way ."
Having joyous hearts inside the soul.
Filled with love, leaving no sinful hole.
Life here after brings" another world".
It's so joyous words cannot be withheld!
Brillant wonders and a magical feast.
Causing strife to that horrible beast.
Longing times for the world to end.
All is needed is to -keep the law- my friend!

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In Another World

Contributed by inoc on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 10:53:28 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

An aching heart that's deep inside.
Facing the worst of pain that can't hide.
Questions that need answers every day.
Standing, sitting and waiting to pray.
Following the narrow winding path,
when the wide straight one is an easy laugh.
Trouble seems to go past this way.
Yet others seem to be managing okay?
The right way, is hard work-no play.
To be sinful feels it's "the easier way ."
Having joyous hearts inside the soul.
Filled with love, leaving no sinful hole.
Life here after brings" another world".
It's so joyous words cannot be withheld!
Brillant wonders and a magical feast.
Causing strife to that horrible beast.
Longing times for the world to end.
All is needed is to -keep the law- my friend!

Copyright © inoc ... [ 2005-07-15 10:53:28]
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Re: In Another World (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 01:07:16 PM AEST
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Well written, well done.

Re: In Another World (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 03:16:10 AM AEST
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Very much truth in what you write Coni. Do they all listen? bernard.

Re: In Another World (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 03:36:24 AM AEST
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well done Coni, venkat

Re: In Another World (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 08:07:28 AM AEST
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So very true Coni.
The Narrow Way is so hard to walk for most of us.
But then "My Yoke is easy and my burden light" - come to me all you that are troubled, then it seems a lot easier. Jesus' Law is liberating.

Wonderful poem.
Love and peace
Elizabeth

Re: In Another World (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 10:07:30 AM AEST
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A very interesting write. This is full of love hope and advice. Good write.

Re: In Another World (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 05:19:31 PM AEST
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Yes, when you come before the Lord, you notice your true self. Whether you are a believer or not, you really can't hide the truth. Keeping busy is the key, keeps the mind stable, I keep learning this in prayer and wonderful friends..we will all reach heaven soon enough, enjoy life for now...

RL

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