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Array ( [sid] => 101245 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken [time] => 2005-07-15 01:29:00 [hometext] => This is the first poem i wrote after my fiance broke up with me because she couldn't handle the distance. [bodytext] => Walking down the street
Hearing every step

Knowing I was there
But she ignored me

I knew she heard me
Every tear dropping

But on I walked
Never to breathe again

Saw my soul fade away
Slowly but very surely

Fate brought us together
Now apart for good

I did scream my fears
And showed her the scars

Kissed her one last time
Then went to face death

She followed me
I pushed her away

Tears fell
And so did I

Hitting the blood
Knowing I was gone

Saw from above
That she did really love me

But to late to go back
Too late for takebacks

Told her I loved her
Told her I cared

But no longer alive
Makes my entire life

Good-bye forever angel
I'll forever miss you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 32 [informant] => xXDreyXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Broken

Contributed by xXDreyXx on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 01:29:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Walking down the street
Hearing every step

Knowing I was there
But she ignored me

I knew she heard me
Every tear dropping

But on I walked
Never to breathe again

Saw my soul fade away
Slowly but very surely

Fate brought us together
Now apart for good

I did scream my fears
And showed her the scars

Kissed her one last time
Then went to face death

She followed me
I pushed her away

Tears fell
And so did I

Hitting the blood
Knowing I was gone

Saw from above
That she did really love me

But to late to go back
Too late for takebacks

Told her I loved her
Told her I cared

But no longer alive
Makes my entire life

Good-bye forever angel
I'll forever miss you




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Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 11:23:10 AM AEST
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This is so sad. A great love lost. It's a tragedy when we love wholeheartedly only never to get it back in return. Good luck to you on future endeavors. This poem was wrought in emotion!
I loved it!
Angel always...joni


Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by halli on Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 03:00:36 PM AEST
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i loved it. it has all the making of a great work

sad, and full of tragedy and lost love! keep it up please.




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