|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
As the water falls
Contributed by
BeHappy
on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 07:00:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
As the water falls,
she grows pale.
Her eyes become red and puffy,
thump, thump, thump,
Her heart beats faster and faster.
As the water falls,
down her cheek,
she lifts her hand.
Lifts the gun in her hand.
As the water falls,
she holds the gun in hand,
and raises the gun to her head.
As the water falls,
she drops the gun but dies still.
Copyright ©
BeHappy
... [
2005-07-14 19:00:36] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: As the water falls
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rae on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 07:43:54 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
i like how you repeated stanza 2 in 3.
very good write. |
|
|
Re: As the water falls
(User Rating: 1 ) by The_Unknown on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 06:15:32 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
That's so sad!
Luvs ya
Jess |
|
|
|