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Array ( [sid] => 101191 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You with her [time] => 2005-07-14 16:03:11 [hometext] => *we are both in relationships with other people but it just doesn't seem. . . . . . .right* [bodytext] => There's a hole in my heart
where you used to be
to this day I am tortured
will I ever be free?

Nina seems great
she's a beautiful girl
but something's wrong with this picture,
I used to be her!

Zacks a nice guy
and his feelings are strong
but my life with out you
just seems plain old wrong

We still talk once a week
and I'm glad we're still friends
but that just makes it harder
for my feelings to end

We are meant to be together
this I know for sure
but for the time being
I have to watch you fall for her [comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 22 [informant] => breny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

You with her

Contributed by breny on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 04:03:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

There's a hole in my heart
where you used to be
to this day I am tortured
will I ever be free?

Nina seems great
she's a beautiful girl
but something's wrong with this picture,
I used to be her!

Zacks a nice guy
and his feelings are strong
but my life with out you
just seems plain old wrong

We still talk once a week
and I'm glad we're still friends
but that just makes it harder
for my feelings to end

We are meant to be together
this I know for sure
but for the time being
I have to watch you fall for her

Copyright © breny ... [ 2005-07-14 16:03:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You with her (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 02:20:46 AM AEST
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This has t be the best yet sadest poem i read 2 day i mean it is as vunerable as an
infant in a dumbster, so mush pain u r going through, and yet able to express it so well, u r one coragieous girl, wish u well my friend
nice 2 see u back writting brenny . . .

(((((((breny))))))))

Ben

Re: You with her (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 12:46:35 AM AEST
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This was such a great ending! Really something that I enjoyed a lot in this write. It's one of your best no doubt, and it was a strong way to end the poem. I hope things end up best in the long run for all of you. This love...square...seems frustrating, but I'm sure you'll be able to pull through. Here's hoping! Great write : )

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