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Array ( [sid] => 101177 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Once Upon A Memory [time] => 2005-07-14 14:26:37 [hometext] => This is the ensconced memory of a man who once went backpacking throughout Europe with a lady that he later lost A reminiscent of sorts, more of a fragment for I seem to feel that it is rather short and abrupt but it just seems 'right' like that ..or not. [bodytext] => Oh, I remember the memories
under the sweet sun of Tuscany
through the cobbled streets of Paris
during that springtime reverie

as we explored all the echoes
the bright lights of Monte Carlo
wetting our feet in tepid shallows
on sandy beaches of Riviera narrows

the breeze that blew your hair askew
those raven tresses that loveliness drew
and those kisses from lips of thine
tasted as the sweetest Bourdeux wine. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Baronhawk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Once Upon A Memory

Contributed by Baronhawk on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 02:26:37 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Oh, I remember the memories
under the sweet sun of Tuscany
through the cobbled streets of Paris
during that springtime reverie

as we explored all the echoes
the bright lights of Monte Carlo
wetting our feet in tepid shallows
on sandy beaches of Riviera narrows

the breeze that blew your hair askew
those raven tresses that loveliness drew
and those kisses from lips of thine
tasted as the sweetest Bourdeux wine.

Copyright © Baronhawk ... [ 2005-07-14 14:26:37]
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Re: Once Upon A Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 02:51:05 PM AEST
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Lovely imagery, well-penned. Seems an abrupt ending fits perfectly with an abrupt loss.

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Re: Once Upon A Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 03:09:36 PM AEST
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not bad, a little short for my taste you left me wanting more, but still...it was good.
-trini

Re: Once Upon A Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 01:12:44 AM AEST
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Oh the journeys you take your readers on Baronhawk. This was so gentle, so kind, such lovely memories, that will last you until the end of time!
I thank you for the romantic trip!
Warm love
consue

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