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Array ( [sid] => 101144 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => stars [time] => 2005-07-14 00:57:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Sometimes at night
When i can't fall asleep
I'll look at the light
Of the buildings and streets

Red of Stop,
Green of Go,
Yellow Slow.

White lights of streets
blinking red light cars,
Blinking white light too.

Blue of ice rinks,
Purple of theaters,
Yellow of the hills,
White commercial.

Then i look up,
and all i see
is a blackish blue fog
with the occasional speck

What a shame it is,
The lights in the sky,
are blocked from view
by the ones on the earth

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stars

Contributed by aplsdka on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 12:57:12 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Sometimes at night
When i can't fall asleep
I'll look at the light
Of the buildings and streets

Red of Stop,
Green of Go,
Yellow Slow.

White lights of streets
blinking red light cars,
Blinking white light too.

Blue of ice rinks,
Purple of theaters,
Yellow of the hills,
White commercial.

Then i look up,
and all i see
is a blackish blue fog
with the occasional speck

What a shame it is,
The lights in the sky,
are blocked from view
by the ones on the earth

Copyright © aplsdka ... [ 2005-07-14 00:57:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: stars (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 02:30:09 AM AEST
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very nice write. no offence, but the middle seemed like it needed a bit more.
-trini

Re: stars (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 03:04:22 AM AEST
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Not bad at all.
I say for a beginner your very talented .
keep writing.

Re: stars (User Rating: 1 )
by aplsdka on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 04:26:16 PM AEST
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yeah, the middle needed more. Actually, i wrote this much better once, but i lost the paper. If i find it i'll post that one

Re: stars (User Rating: 1 )
by paul_x_walker on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 09:45:44 PM AEST
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your getting better then me good job ashley

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