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-Quiver & tremble-
When my permanent frown is painted upside down.
-Quiver & tremble-
When you see my face.
-Quiver & tremble-
When I put you in your place.
-Quiver & tremble-
When no one is around.
-Quiver & tremble-
Every time I come around.
-Quiver & tremble-
When you think of what I may do.
-Quiver & tremble-
When Christ shall not hear your silent cries.
-Quiver & tremble-
As blood fills your eyes.
-Quiver & tremble-
As I slowly make a slice.
-Quiver & tremble-
When you roll your life’s last pair of dice.
-Quiver & tremble-
When I tear your heart out.
-Quiver & tremble-
As I rip your insides out.
-Quiver & tremble-
As I tear your beating heart from your chest.
-Quiver & tremble-
As you watch the rest.
-Quiver & tremble-
As you take your last gasp of air.
-Quiver & tremble-
When you know this is not fair.
-Quiver & tremble-
As you see my hateful eyes.
-Quiver & tremble-
When you see my silent cries.
-Quiver & tremble-
When you think of what you could have done.
-Quiver & tremble-
As you drink your last bottle of rum.
-Quiver & tremble-
As you beat me with it.
-Quiver & tremble-
When I ask you this…
“Daddy, why couldn’t you just read me a bedtime story?”
-Quiver & tremble-
As you slowly die… [comments] => 1 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 48 [informant] => addicted2selfharm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Quiver & Tremble

Contributed by addicted2selfharm on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 03:12:04 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

When I come around.
-Quiver & tremble-
When my permanent frown is painted upside down.
-Quiver & tremble-
When you see my face.
-Quiver & tremble-
When I put you in your place.
-Quiver & tremble-
When no one is around.
-Quiver & tremble-
Every time I come around.
-Quiver & tremble-
When you think of what I may do.
-Quiver & tremble-
When Christ shall not hear your silent cries.
-Quiver & tremble-
As blood fills your eyes.
-Quiver & tremble-
As I slowly make a slice.
-Quiver & tremble-
When you roll your life’s last pair of dice.
-Quiver & tremble-
When I tear your heart out.
-Quiver & tremble-
As I rip your insides out.
-Quiver & tremble-
As I tear your beating heart from your chest.
-Quiver & tremble-
As you watch the rest.
-Quiver & tremble-
As you take your last gasp of air.
-Quiver & tremble-
When you know this is not fair.
-Quiver & tremble-
As you see my hateful eyes.
-Quiver & tremble-
When you see my silent cries.
-Quiver & tremble-
When you think of what you could have done.
-Quiver & tremble-
As you drink your last bottle of rum.
-Quiver & tremble-
As you beat me with it.
-Quiver & tremble-
When I ask you this…
“Daddy, why couldn’t you just read me a bedtime story?”
-Quiver & tremble-
As you slowly die…

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Re: Quiver & Tremble (User Rating: 1 )
by Dri on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 06:57:31 PM AEST
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meaningful, with an abrubt ending. very good. keep writing! i really enjoyed this.

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