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Array ( [sid] => 101089 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => He Did It Too [time] => 2005-07-13 13:22:18 [hometext] => i am 24 years old, and my parents who i thought would be together forever are getting a divorce [bodytext] => She said I’m sorry
And begged him to stay
Tears ran down her face
And he walked away

He always did the wrong
He always did the lying
She always took the worst
She always did the crying

Somehow things changed
She did the wrong
He said he couldn’t stay
That they didn’t belong

Her worst fear
Has now come to life
He wants a divorce
She’s no longer his wife

Of all the stupid things
She had to be untrue
His one secret though
Was he did it too
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 23 [informant] => ninnyfarfar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

He Did It Too

Contributed by ninnyfarfar on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 01:22:18 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

She said I’m sorry
And begged him to stay
Tears ran down her face
And he walked away

He always did the wrong
He always did the lying
She always took the worst
She always did the crying

Somehow things changed
She did the wrong
He said he couldn’t stay
That they didn’t belong

Her worst fear
Has now come to life
He wants a divorce
She’s no longer his wife

Of all the stupid things
She had to be untrue
His one secret though
Was he did it too

Copyright Â© ninnyfarfar ... [ 2005-07-13 13:22:18]
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Re: He Did It Too (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 02:14:21 PM AEST
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Good Write, you really used your poem to tell the story well, Im sorry about your parents, mine broke up when I was 11...if you find time could u please comment on You Saved Me, or maybe some of my other poems? it would really mean a lot to me. Great write, keep up the good work!

Re: He Did It Too (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 04:03:37 PM AEST
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Sad poem but u told the story well!

i know how u feel.. i never knew my dad

he left me when i was little so i never

knew him and i didnt have a dad,
im sorry about your parents getting a divorce..

if u could plz comment me on my poems sometimes if would be nice.

hugs butterflygirl40^_^

Re: He Did It Too (User Rating: 1 )
by RoxyGirl on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 01:30:12 AM AEST
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I really like your write it good and i hope to read more
LOVE ALWAYS YOUR FRIEND
ROXYGIRL

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