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Array ( [sid] => 101064 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => sorry for being alive [time] => 2005-07-13 04:48:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => she is sitting in the corner

waiting for her life to pass her by

but it takes so long

because she has been waiting for this for her whole life

she doesnt want to live

she puts her hands upon a knife

thinking to herself

should i or not

shakeing out of her skin

hearing herself breathe

harder and harder

no one understood her

she never knew someone who did

her eyes set on the kinfe

she was sure

she placed the knife upon her chest

turning cold by the second

she said with her last breath

sorry for being alive

she closed her eyes

and went to sleep

a deep sleep

never to have to face the world again






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sorry for being alive

Contributed by hopefades on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 04:48:57 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



she is sitting in the corner

waiting for her life to pass her by

but it takes so long

because she has been waiting for this for her whole life

she doesnt want to live

she puts her hands upon a knife

thinking to herself

should i or not

shakeing out of her skin

hearing herself breathe

harder and harder

no one understood her

she never knew someone who did

her eyes set on the kinfe

she was sure

she placed the knife upon her chest

turning cold by the second

she said with her last breath

sorry for being alive

she closed her eyes

and went to sleep

a deep sleep

never to have to face the world again










Copyright © hopefades ... [ 2005-07-13 04:48:57]
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Re: sorry for being alive (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 04:51:27 AM AEST
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wonderful poem. and i can relate. great job. peace. jena


Re: sorry for being alive (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 09:48:30 AM AEST
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I personally didn't like this because this was an ending line for one of my poems and it kind of took away the meaning in mine. That's just my little insecurities though, this was a great poem and well written.

Keep it up,
.amanda.


Re: sorry for being alive (User Rating: 1 )
by rhyrhy on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 07:15:28 PM AEST
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hey sexy! i love the poem! it was fabulous! haha shawn's partay was fun! haha shawn freakin with me. hahahahahaahahah! good times good times! I freakin love you!
rhyan aka: Ferd

lets hang out soon! cuz i already miss you even though i just got back home from spending a weekend with you!


Re: sorry for being alive (User Rating: 1 )
by xthrewmyluvawayx on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:37:03 AM AEST
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aww sad....ive felt like that soo many times ....its not fun....i really loved this poem though...awesome job!


Re: sorry for being alive (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 12:27:36 PM AEST
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I know exactly how that feels. Many times I have felt that way and wanted to do exactly that. Good write




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