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Array ( [sid] => 10106 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Sometimes... [time] => 2003-01-10 03:40:00 [hometext] => I was raped when i was 9 years old. Even though it is now 7 later, i still haven't been able to get my life back. This poem isn't good at all, but it really did the trick for me one night when I was feeling low and I guess I thought maybe someone else out there could relate to this and know they are not alone. If this has happened to you, I just want to tell you that you are not alone, because i know how it feels to think that your the only one - i feel it everyday.
peace - Patterz* [bodytext] => Sometimes…
At night I see your face
Those cold, hard eyes
showing no remorse for what
you were doing

Sometimes…
During school I relive the pain
Having to run
to the bathroom to be alone
Because I cannot pretend to be alright

Sometimes…
I wish that I were dead
Because it seems to be
the only way to escape
what you did to me

sometimes…
I wish that I was strong
That some how I could
get the control back
in my life

Sometimes…I wish you would be the one who hurt

-P@
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Patterz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Sometimes...

Contributed by Patterz on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 03:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Sometimes…
At night I see your face
Those cold, hard eyes
showing no remorse for what
you were doing

Sometimes…
During school I relive the pain
Having to run
to the bathroom to be alone
Because I cannot pretend to be alright

Sometimes…
I wish that I were dead
Because it seems to be
the only way to escape
what you did to me

sometimes…
I wish that I was strong
That some how I could
get the control back
in my life

Sometimes…I wish you would be the one who hurt

-P@

Copyright Â© Patterz ... [ 2003-01-10 03:40:00]
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Re: Sometimes... (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 05:33:19 AM AEST
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wow.. this poem is really close to truth i was raped when i was like 6 and still 8 years later its so hard to forget...great poem keep writtin and trying to deal with it.. i think that u really need to have friends around that care bout u to support u.

and as u said remember u r not alone..

Re: Sometimes... (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 09:40:42 AM AEST
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This was such a touching right,how hard it must have been for you at that time & even now! I hope there will be rainbows in your future! This is a horrible crime! Good poem! Christina

Re: Sometimes... (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 05:03:50 PM AEST
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Wow... the last line really got to me I liked this poem a lot it was so sad and very well written contrary to what u said. Ppl who do that to children... well I have no words to say to that. Your not alone though remember that. Keep up these poems I have found writing poetry is like medication. Keep yer chin up and sometimes tears can be healing.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Sometimes... (User Rating: 1 )
by Fiona on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 04:06:17 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem...its very truthful. I look forward to reading more of your poetry, I think you have a knack for it. No matter what happens, there are ppl who love you! God bless. Fiona

Re: Sometimes... (User Rating: 1 )
by SpreadYourWings on Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 01:57:40 AM AEST
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I am sorry that this has happened to you patterz. Its an awful thing that I feel fortunate not to have happen to me, although i do know someone who has. Beautiful poem. best of luck to you in the future

Re: Sometimes... (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 01:18:47 PM AEST
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i know how u feel. i was also raped when i was 9 and it has been 8 long years. this poem spoke to me. thanx for sharing it... the man that raped me called me from jail, hoping that i would testify that i forgave him... to this day i cant forgive him especially because after he raped me, he killed my friend. anyways thanx for posting, it feels good to know that others have gone through similar experiences.

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