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Array ( [sid] => 101045 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Reality [time] => 2005-07-13 01:44:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A Reality

How often to you stop and wonder
when the day will come
When the dreams and wishes that you have
A Reality, they become

You will wake up in the morning
with a smile on your face
Your lover laying next to you
finally, in the right place

The two of you so happy
having waited all this time
At last in your own world
the feeling so sublime

Could it get any better
then it is on this day
All the things you are doing together
and the loving words you say

Happiness there with you,
finding its place in your life
You can now live out your lives
as a loving man and wife
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A Reality

Contributed by Bruce on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 01:44:58 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



A Reality

How often to you stop and wonder
when the day will come
When the dreams and wishes that you have
A Reality, they become

You will wake up in the morning
with a smile on your face
Your lover laying next to you
finally, in the right place

The two of you so happy
having waited all this time
At last in your own world
the feeling so sublime

Could it get any better
then it is on this day
All the things you are doing together
and the loving words you say

Happiness there with you,
finding its place in your life
You can now live out your lives
as a loving man and wife




Copyright © Bruce ... [ 2005-07-13 01:44:58]
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Re: A Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 01:53:03 AM AEST
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love at its best and poetry even better this does my soul good to read your lovely poems Bruce Im glad that your sharing again
hugsssssss
Michelle


Re: A Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 02:22:26 AM AEST
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A good theme, and nicely written.

I just might hear a bit of a tendency to put words in different orders and such to achieve rhyme, which isn't an advisable thing, as it can hurt your poetry. But there's not any much of it here. Just a "word to the wise".

Keep it up!

Andrew


Re: A Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 10:32:59 AM AEST
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what a sweeet and lovely write.


Re: A Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 04:07:45 PM AEST
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Love is finally a reality. Wonderful.


Re: A Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by paul_x_walker on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:33:08 PM AEST
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this is really good
i loved it


Re: A Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by paul_x_walker on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:33:08 PM AEST
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this is really good
i loved it


Re: A Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by paul_x_walker on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:34:35 PM AEST
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oops i didnt mean to poet this twice
anyway this poem deserves it


(hugs and kisses)
Jennifer


Re: A Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by paul_x_walker on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:35:27 PM AEST
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post i mean


(hugs and kisses)
jennifer




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