Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 18:12:28 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 100907 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Way I See You [time] => 2005-07-11 22:13:10 [hometext] => This was wrote for a girl who I lost and now I feel ignored by her completely even though we're still friends. [bodytext] => Every night I lay in bed
And as I look up overhead
I see the bottom of my brother’s bed.
But through my eyes I see it all
The world so big and me so small
Seeing us together on top of it all
Wondering what life would be
If me and you
Were still to be.

I lie in bed and imagine that
Life would be back the way I wished.
But now I just think that it is all a dream.
And then I wake up… oh wait!
I was already awake and I wasn’t dreaming.
So now I lay there hoping that
You can see me once more
The way I see you.

Now I’m here in class
And look at you
A piece of glass
Too pure for even my eyes to behold.
I would always smile
And take a while
To show you that I cared.
…now I’m dreaming…
I just woke up from a dream
I recalled has happened before
Because THAT wasn’t a dream
It happened before… but now
It’s only IN my dreams I
Can see you looking back
With the same feelings…
The way I see you.

I walk into school
And into the room
Where I presume
You are… just so I can see
Your smiling face so my day
Starts off right.

But lo’ and behold, I see him
Standing with his arm around you
And I’m back into the nightmare.
These visions haunt me day
And night… Is there a way
To stop the decay
Of my brain and being
Flushed down the drain?



Jealousy is a stinky cologne
I know… but that’s the feeling
That strikes when I see her and a
“Not-Me”.
For months I have longed for
You to see me
The way I see you.

I can’t believe what I did
And it’s mostly because
I was a stupid kid.
Naïve and meek were traits I held
But now I see things clearly.
The dark skies of nightmare shift to
Clouds of hope…
Hoping that soon I’ll have a chance
To tell you how I feel.

But now I see you and sometimes I think
That it is hard enough to gain your attention.
I’ve taken a back seat and make a cameo
When you’re hurting.
Because all I am is just a friend
Nothing more… hopefully none less.
But still I lay in bed and dream
For one last embrace before
You forget about me completely.
When I give you hugs, it feels so right to me.
When you receive one, it’s “just another one”.
No meaning for you… ecstasy for me
It brings me back to the days where I
Was constantly happy.
Now I wear this mask to hide my
Feelings… so do not disturb.
Until that day comes I’ll dream of hoping…
You see me…
The way I see you.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 22 [informant] => IntnstyAngle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
The Way I See You

Contributed by IntnstyAngle on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 10:13:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Every night I lay in bed
And as I look up overhead
I see the bottom of my brother’s bed.
But through my eyes I see it all
The world so big and me so small
Seeing us together on top of it all
Wondering what life would be
If me and you
Were still to be.

I lie in bed and imagine that
Life would be back the way I wished.
But now I just think that it is all a dream.
And then I wake up… oh wait!
I was already awake and I wasn’t dreaming.
So now I lay there hoping that
You can see me once more
The way I see you.

Now I’m here in class
And look at you
A piece of glass
Too pure for even my eyes to behold.
I would always smile
And take a while
To show you that I cared.
…now I’m dreaming…
I just woke up from a dream
I recalled has happened before
Because THAT wasn’t a dream
It happened before… but now
It’s only IN my dreams I
Can see you looking back
With the same feelings…
The way I see you.

I walk into school
And into the room
Where I presume
You are… just so I can see
Your smiling face so my day
Starts off right.

But lo’ and behold, I see him
Standing with his arm around you
And I’m back into the nightmare.
These visions haunt me day
And night… Is there a way
To stop the decay
Of my brain and being
Flushed down the drain?



Jealousy is a stinky cologne
I know… but that’s the feeling
That strikes when I see her and a
“Not-Me”.
For months I have longed for
You to see me
The way I see you.

I can’t believe what I did
And it’s mostly because
I was a stupid kid.
Naïve and meek were traits I held
But now I see things clearly.
The dark skies of nightmare shift to
Clouds of hope…
Hoping that soon I’ll have a chance
To tell you how I feel.

But now I see you and sometimes I think
That it is hard enough to gain your attention.
I’ve taken a back seat and make a cameo
When you’re hurting.
Because all I am is just a friend
Nothing more… hopefully none less.
But still I lay in bed and dream
For one last embrace before
You forget about me completely.
When I give you hugs, it feels so right to me.
When you receive one, it’s “just another one”.
No meaning for you… ecstasy for me
It brings me back to the days where I
Was constantly happy.
Now I wear this mask to hide my
Feelings… so do not disturb.
Until that day comes I’ll dream of hoping…
You see me…
The way I see you.




Copyright © IntnstyAngle ... [ 2005-07-11 22:13:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: The Way I See You (User Rating: 1 )
by YouTryToBeScene on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 10:32:12 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This is honestly the best poem I have ever read. And I'm not just saying that because he's my friend and I had to spend about 4 days with him.


Re: The Way I See You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jibz on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 10:47:09 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This is a very long poem.. but i can kind of understand what your going through. To me it REALLY captures what goes through ones' head when experiencing such a situation. Very well done! you should be proud of your work


Re: The Way I See You (User Rating: 1 )
by SinginSilence on Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:06:14 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
best poem you ever read? i think you should read some more poetry friend. I do like this poem alot, though i dont know if it's something about the verse itself or just that i can relate to it. I think this was well done, you should most definitly keep writing, and yes be proud of your work.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com