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[sid] => 100891
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Healing my Voids
[time] => 2005-07-11 19:07:44
[hometext] => When feeling empty, and you know something is missing, it sometimes is hard to figure out what?
[bodytext] => A knife was taken By your well-steadied hand Sliced my way of thinking Now I can't seem to understand What was my fuel? Where is my ambiton? Who will talk to me? And who will only listen? Why do I feel empty? Always growing more cold. Why is it still not enough, When I do what I am told? Why am I stuck? Not allowed to move. What's missing in my heart? How is this pain soothed? There's so much more, To be discovered in my life, No matter how hard I search, I can't ever see the light. So, I tell you I'm not worthy I desperately need your help. Would you do this for me? I cannot go on by myself. A stitch was taken By your trembling hand Sewing together my wounds Scars remain allowing me to understand --- Just to note in case it went unnoticed, the hand is steady in the first stanza to represent how it is easier to bring people down, and in the last stanza it is trembling because it takes far more courage to help people. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 61 [informant] => dreamer_4_eternity [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
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