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Array ( [sid] => 100879 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Snoopy The Dragon [time] => 2005-07-11 16:08:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => There was a baby dragon
Snoopy was his name
He was so vey friendly
And also very tame

He had one little problem
I bet you'd never guess
He had a nose for trouble
Was always in a mess

He stuck his nose in everything
He tried to act so coy
Unfortunate but we all knew
He was a naughty boy

But one day poor old Snoopy
He had to pay the price
For being far too nosy
It wasn't very nice

A bee hive looked inviting
To stick his nose inside
Of course, found out the hard way
He got more than hurt pride

The bee's they were not happy
To see the dragon's tongue
He ran round village crying
Oh, no I have been stung

So Snoopy learnt his lesson
And now knows not to pry
The bee's had better hide away
Or he'll make sure they fry [comments] => 4 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 5 [informant] => gwenevere [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChildrensPoetry )
Snoopy The Dragon

Contributed by gwenevere on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 04:08:02 PM in AEST
Topic: ChildrensPoetry



There was a baby dragon
Snoopy was his name
He was so vey friendly
And also very tame

He had one little problem
I bet you'd never guess
He had a nose for trouble
Was always in a mess

He stuck his nose in everything
He tried to act so coy
Unfortunate but we all knew
He was a naughty boy

But one day poor old Snoopy
He had to pay the price
For being far too nosy
It wasn't very nice

A bee hive looked inviting
To stick his nose inside
Of course, found out the hard way
He got more than hurt pride

The bee's they were not happy
To see the dragon's tongue
He ran round village crying
Oh, no I have been stung

So Snoopy learnt his lesson
And now knows not to pry
The bee's had better hide away
Or he'll make sure they fry




Copyright © gwenevere ... [ 2005-07-11 16:08:02]
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Re: Snoopy The Dragon (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 06:57:42 PM AEST
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well done


Re: Snoopy The Dragon (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 10:47:36 PM AEST
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very cute...it brings me back to my boyhood.

wizard


Re: Snoopy The Dragon (User Rating: 1 )
by bgj on Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 02:55:01 PM AEST
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I like this. Good job!
bgj


Re: Snoopy The Dragon (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 10:58:59 PM AEST
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Had the great rhyming scheme like all your work..
and the idea was so innocent and precious..

Tad bit more puncuation 'round the last line of 6th would'nt of hurt..
(as if he were speaking?)

and the very last line as well..
(exclamation points are in order!!)
He WILL make sure they'll fry!!..lol


It was cute all the same!

B




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