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His Smile
Contributed by
Elizabeth_Dandy
on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 01:44:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I pushed the shopping cart with my right hand
My coat had slipped, and trailed upon the ground;
Hair straggled out beneath a rubber band,
My plaster cast’s worn sling was badly bound.
Some lady neared and with a quick deft twist
Threaded the button holes with twine and string
Then raised the sling that held my broken wrist
And draped my coat so it would stay and cling,
And in her luminous eyes I recognized
The sympathetic loving eyes of Christ.
Before our building a construction team
By a young Nicaraguan supervised,
To let me safely pass raised up a beam;
Their garb was smelly. stained and oversized
They smiled - and I had seen the smile of Christ.
© Elizabeth Dandy
Copyright ©
Elizabeth_Dandy
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2005-07-11 13:44:59] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: His Smile
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 10:27:17 PM AEST (User
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Awesome write, Elizabeth..... Wow...
Great pics too...
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Re: His Smile
(User Rating: 1 ) by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 03:16:22 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful. |
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Re: His Smile
(User Rating: 1 ) by bernard on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 02:28:29 PM AEST (User
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Wunderschön. Eine wahre geschicht.
Beautiful a true story written in faith.
God bless from Martha and bernard, |
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Re: His Smile
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 04:27:20 AM AEST (User
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Beautifull writing.
a fine testimate to his luv for all.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: His Smile
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 02:46:24 PM AEST (User
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this is beautiful stuff! thank you for sharing your work, it is wonderful and i am enjoying getting to know you through your poetry. it is always a blessing to get to know a sister in Christ. may he continue to direct your paths!
shalom,
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Re: His Smile
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 09:01:42 PM AEST (User
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Elizabeth dear, this reminds me of what Jesus said, "By these man's actions you will be able to identify them. And now you have taken that for a slight twist. To see him in all of these different individuals. What a wonderful positive outlook with spiritual tones you have. This is just simply awesome.
I have felt this way many times. To see a kindness in another's eyes, or a courage gesture reminding me of his courage......
I really enjoyed this poem ED, and always learn so much
Thank you for sharing
Warm love
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Re: His Smile
(User Rating: 1 ) by inoc on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 11:05:40 AM AEST (User
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A beautiful write !!!
- Jesus is in our lives we just have to have the faith...He is real as your poem shines!!!
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Re: His Smile
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sinned on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 10:17:48 PM AEST (User
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Elizabeth
Beautiful; just "Beautiful"
Sinned |
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