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Carry me away...My love

Wrapped in your embrace

Slowly...up the staircase

Desire burning in my eyes

Lay me down...My love

Amidst a bed of roses

Lustful...my heart pulses

Your hand moves up my thigh

Kiss me sweetly...My love

Taste...of cherry fantasies

Slipping off.... my silken panties

I emit a pleasurable sigh

Ravish me completely...My love

Partake of warm pink flesh

Drinking fully of my sweetness

Our bodies now entwine

Fulfill me...endlessly...My love

Penetrating...deep within my soul

Allowing esctacy to take hold

Riding high....atop Cloud Nine

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Cloud Nine

Contributed by CarolinaBlue on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 06:23:45 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Carry me away...My love

Wrapped in your embrace

Slowly...up the staircase

Desire burning in my eyes

Lay me down...My love

Amidst a bed of roses

Lustful...my heart pulses

Your hand moves up my thigh

Kiss me sweetly...My love

Taste...of cherry fantasies

Slipping off.... my silken panties

I emit a pleasurable sigh

Ravish me completely...My love

Partake of warm pink flesh

Drinking fully of my sweetness

Our bodies now entwine

Fulfill me...endlessly...My love

Penetrating...deep within my soul

Allowing esctacy to take hold

Riding high....atop Cloud Nine

Copyright © CarolinaBlue ... [ 2005-07-11 06:23:45]
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Re: Cloud Nine (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 09:57:18 AM AEST
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Lovely poem a poetic nude painting nicely done . . .

Ben

Re: Cloud Nine (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 10:13:42 AM AEST
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Well written........mind wondering , yet very subtle. Thanks for sharing.

Brew~

Re: Cloud Nine (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 04:17:40 PM AEST
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Aww this was so beautiful. A pretty tender write. I enjoyed it.

Thanks for posting.

Jane xxx

Re: Cloud Nine (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 04:54:02 PM AEST
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Sultry indeed! Sexy stuff!! Another good one Blue...Keep it up.

Scorp.

Re: Cloud Nine (User Rating: 1 )
by CarolinaBlue on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 04:57:27 PM AEST
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ok you either like this one or you hate it, I was a little uncomfortable posting it because of it's suggestive nature, but it was meant to be subtle and tender. I guess it all depends on the mind's eye. just had to clear that up, had been feeling uncomfortable with this write since i posted it!

;-) ~Blue~

Re: Cloud Nine (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 10:51:40 PM AEST
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wow...um..well..*blushing*..I ...ah..

steamy stuff...very erotic..i didnt find it very 'subtle', but i can see why some may.

very nice...i enjoy a sexy write like this from a woman!! ;-)

wizard

Re: Cloud Nine (User Rating: 1 )
by ribbons_and_lace09 on Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 06:28:31 PM AEST
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wow! this is an amazing write! kudos to you! i absolutely love it! make me want to go grab my lover and hug him and never let go. hehe! :) very very beautiful.
always,
megan

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