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The Way That Only Stars Can

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:50:16 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



If I were the sky looking down on you

And saw you looking up at me in sorrow

I would surely make it rain

So you would not have to cry alone

If I ever were heaven and saw alone and sad

I would send you down all my angels

So that one of them could be yours

If I were an angel

The avatar of all your hopes and dreams

I would envelope you up in my wings

I would love you and never let you go

If I were there and you loved me

I would never let you feel passed over

You would never be pushed aside

If it were snowing and I saw you shiver

I would wrap you up in all my warmth

So we could watch the snow together

I have never seen it snow before

If I were the sky and you looked up at me

And I saw that in your eye you had a wish to make

I would make a thousand stars fall just for you

Because I have fallen for you the way

That only stars can




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Re: The Way That Only Stars Can (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 01:19:49 AM AEST
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Celestial.
Simply magical.
*applauds*


Re: The Way That Only Stars Can (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 02:34:52 AM AEST
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Incredible dearest john!

So very beautiful, I especially liked the last stanza. I love your word imagery, so powerful and full of meaning.

This was awesome john, you are beyond brilliant.

Hope to you
Rach *smiles*


Re: The Way That Only Stars Can (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 02:48:44 AM AEST
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Wow!
this is a heavenly beautifull write.
Really have u never seen it snow?
A heavenly masterpeice of beauty.
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: The Way That Only Stars Can (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 03:13:37 AM AEST
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And i will catch you as only dreams can, a beautiful write...and don't forget the snowboarding (tehehe)...muaw


Re: The Way That Only Stars Can (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 03:33:56 AM AEST
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Beautiful piece, I must say. I think this poem tells its message with a straightforwardness and a grace that are not combined very often.

Well done.

Andrew


Re: The Way That Only Stars Can (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 12:22:43 PM AEST
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Wow that was truly beautiful!!! I absolutely loved that one. You have a flare for romance and a talent as well. I would love to hear something like that written for me. Whoever this person is, is very lucky. Great job and you are a wonderful poet!!




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