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Array ( [sid] => 10077 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Þjáning framtíðarinnar [time] => 2003-01-09 18:20:00 [hometext] => oki, here is the second poem that i publish on this site =) ....... i wrote it on icelandic so many of you will not understand what i´m writing about but i don´t care because icelandic (the language) is the most beautiful language in the world........ [bodytext] => Þessi veröld í dag, þessi dauða ganga,
við höldum áfram sem hlekkjaðir fangar.
Hvert lífsins barn sem fæðist hér,
ekkert þess bíður nema heimsins eyðinga her.

Himinninn er fallinn, fór hann af braut,
fjandinn sjálfur, þetta er hin versta þraut.
Hið síðasta blóm ber hið síðasta fræ,
allt verður búið ef það sekkur í sæ.

Þá skal berjast, þá skal þjást,
vont verður að koma, þá þekkiru ást.
Sýnum samstöðu, sameinumst öll,
siglum áfram og vinnum okkar völl. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 486 [topic] => 21 [informant] => kolbrun [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => icelandic [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Þjáning framtíðarinnar

Contributed by kolbrun on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Þessi veröld í dag, þessi dauða ganga,
við höldum áfram sem hlekkjaðir fangar.
Hvert lífsins barn sem fæðist hér,
ekkert þess bíður nema heimsins eyðinga her.

Himinninn er fallinn, fór hann af braut,
fjandinn sjálfur, þetta er hin versta þraut.
Hið síðasta blóm ber hið síðasta fræ,
allt verður búið ef það sekkur í sæ.

Þá skal berjast, þá skal þjást,
vont verður að koma, þá þekkiru ást.
Sýnum samstöðu, sameinumst öll,
siglum áfram og vinnum okkar völl.

Copyright Â© kolbrun ... [ 2003-01-09 18:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Þjáning framtíðarinnar (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 09:35:32 PM AEST
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i dont understand it true, but it seems to be a wonderful poem

Re: Þjáning framtíðarinnar (User Rating: 1 )
by aernby on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 11:21:35 PM AEST
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wish i understood better--the poem seems intricate -- aliteration, and word play some a t least have break mid line --- much like anglo-saxon poetry.

good write

aern+

Re: Þjáning framtíðarinnar (User Rating: 1 )
by kolbrun on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 05:54:49 AM AEST
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thank you..........=)

Re: Þjáning framtíðarinnar (User Rating: 1 )
by kolbrun on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 05:55:33 AM AEST
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thank you........... =)

Re: Þjáning framtíðarinnar (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 11:48:24 PM AEST
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I don't have the first clue of what this says..but..I don't need to. It's absolutely beautiful. It could be a bunch of gibberish for all i care..the look, the feel, it's just...beautiful...

Re: Þjáning framtíðarinnar (User Rating: 1 )
by maria_mendonez_ibardolas on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 08:27:55 AM AEST
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hehehehehehe I think this is the best poem that I ever read. I have no clue at all but just stare at some of the words written in your language.Wish I could understand it but I guess there is no chance for that.Anyway its still lovely,I guess so?

Re: Þjáning framtíðarinnar (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 07:25:53 AM AEST
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very nice, great write.

Re: Þjáning framtíðarinnar (User Rating: 1 )
by Gribba on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 06:00:43 AM AEST
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Þetta er ótrúlega flott hjá þér...
Þessar línur
"Þessi veröld í dag, þessi dauða ganga,
við höldum áfram sem hlekkjaðir fangar.
Hvert lífsins barn sem fæðist hér,
ekkert þess bíður nema heimsins eyðinga her. "
ég bara féll fyrir þeim...
Áhrifamikið og sterkt!!!
næsta erindi er einnig jafn áhrifa mikið en það fyrsta bara skellur í andlitið á manni...

varðandi síðasta erindið finnst mér tvær síðustu línurnar ekki alveg viðeigandi, draga svolítð úr áhrifum ljóðsins...

en persónulega finnst mér að ljóðið ætti að enda á þessu:
"Þá skal berjast, þá skal þjást,
vont verður að koma, þá þekkiru ást. "
ef mögulegt er að setja eitthvað á undan svo ljóði haldi sinni upprunalegu mynd og formi.

En annars geggjað flott ljóð!!!

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