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Array ( [sid] => 100757 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Jealousy [time] => 2005-07-10 16:48:10 [hometext] => Have you ever felt like everyone else was having more fun than you? [bodytext] => I sit alone, cast off and out of place
I watch as the others play cards and race
Their laughter fills the air
It fills me with annoyance
Of my presence they are unaware

Already I feel the struggle of the beast
With every passing moment the volume of its roar does increase
I know not whether to weep or to rave
The beast bellows as it charges out of its cave

I try to hold back
I try to contain it
Yet I know there is nothing that can tame it

The beast consumes me
Its red anger is now the only thing I can see
Now there is nothing that can break me free
I sit here and wait for the moment it dies
Only to wait for it to once again rise

What is this foul creature that lurks deep inside of me?
It is the beast inside of everyone:
Jealousy [comments] => 2 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Kitty06 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Jealousy

Contributed by Kitty06 on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 04:48:10 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I sit alone, cast off and out of place
I watch as the others play cards and race
Their laughter fills the air
It fills me with annoyance
Of my presence they are unaware

Already I feel the struggle of the beast
With every passing moment the volume of its roar does increase
I know not whether to weep or to rave
The beast bellows as it charges out of its cave

I try to hold back
I try to contain it
Yet I know there is nothing that can tame it

The beast consumes me
Its red anger is now the only thing I can see
Now there is nothing that can break me free
I sit here and wait for the moment it dies
Only to wait for it to once again rise

What is this foul creature that lurks deep inside of me?
It is the beast inside of everyone:
Jealousy

Copyright © Kitty06 ... [ 2005-07-10 16:48:10]
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Re: Jealousy (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:37:28 PM AEST
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again, a topic that hits home with me. excellent written and your message is so well conveyed.

so many times i've experienced this...wondering why everyone is having so much fun, seeming to laugh at nothing. it use to anger me, now i have a new outlook...and it seems i'm the one having the fun...its better on this side!

great job!!

wiz

Re: Jealousy (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 05:24:45 AM AEST
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people have never really noticed me either, then quite recently, i found out that, they do notice me, but the decide to iggnore me.
to blank me..
and then to mock me later.

i know everyone gets jealousey from time to time, but the way you describes it, sound to me, like the demonds that haunt me.

good write.
and REMEMBER you're are NEVER alone!

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